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the other part of the idea we were talking about Jace
Talri_NikaniDate: Thursday, 30 Sep 2010, 9:26 AM | Message # 1
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Broadside-class cruiser kdb-2

Production information:
Manufacturer: Kuat Drive Yards
Origonal Allegiance: Imperial

Model: Broadside-class cruiser kdb-2

Class:
- Cruiser
- Capital ship

Technical specifications:

Length: 500 meters

Armament:
- 40 Consussion missile launchers
- 2 Turbolaser cannons
- 2 Tractor beam projectors

Support:
- 12 Vulture Droid Starfighters(External rack)
- 1 Nu-Class Assault shuttles(External Rack)

Crew:
- 100 B-1 Battledroids(reprogramed for service onboard the ship)
- 50 B-2 Super Battledroids for security

Message edited by Talri_Nikani - Thursday, 07 Oct 2010, 2:37 PM
 
OrionKarathDate: Monday, 04 Oct 2010, 8:59 PM | Message # 2
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Am I to assume this is a request for a Broadside-class Cruiser?
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Talri_NikaniDate: Tuesday, 05 Oct 2010, 4:14 AM | Message # 3
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This is a request for a modified Broadside class cruiser. I will PM the idea that spawned this.
 
Jace_VaritekDate: Thursday, 07 Oct 2010, 2:23 PM | Message # 4
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Just a couple questions. How are the Nu-class shuttles and droid starfighters stored? I'm assuming on external racks? It doesn't seem to me that even a modified Broadside-class cruiser would have any room onboard for a fighter complement. If it is an external rack, 36 fighters seems like a bit much—most external racks, such as on Carrack-class cruisers and others, seem to accomodate only 12 (usually TIE Fighters, which, like droid starfighters, are compact and easily stored). The same goes with the crew, I think. I've never imagined the Broadside having a crew of much more 100, maximum. 200 B2s for security, I think, is certainly redundant, especially since, to reiterate, this is a support ship for your shipyard.

I'd say that if you'd like a normal Broadside-class cruiser that's been modified with racks to carry a small complement, I would vote to APPROVE that. The tractor beams are probably fine, too. I'm skeptical about the rest though, including where these additional armaments would have come from. I'd prefer seeing you RP out the acquisition of weapons, maybe from a dealer somewhere. I know you want to get the basics out of the way before you RP, but I would like to see a bit more RP from your character before many more requests are approved.

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Talri_NikaniDate: Thursday, 07 Oct 2010, 2:30 PM | Message # 5
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So:

-12 vulture droids
- 1 Nu-class shuttle

These found on exterior racks?

and the initial stats on the Broadside(with approved modification) is as follows:

Broadside-class cruiser kdb-1

Production information:

Manufacturer: Kuat Drive Yards
Model: Broadside-class cruiser kdb-1

Class:

Corvette
Cruiser
Capital ship

Technical specifications:

Length: 500 meters
Crew: 100 B1 battledroids made for Ship command/operation
Security: 50 B2 Battledroids

Armament
- Consussion missile launchers (40)
- Turbolasers (2)
- Tractor Beam Projectors (2)

Compliment(External racks):

- 12 Vulture droid
- 1 Nu-Class shuttle

Message edited by Talri_Nikani - Thursday, 07 Oct 2010, 2:36 PM
 
Jace_VaritekDate: Thursday, 07 Oct 2010, 2:34 PM | Message # 6
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Looks perfect. And are we assuming a crew of say, 100 B1s and about 50 or so B2s for security?
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Talri_NikaniDate: Thursday, 07 Oct 2010, 2:38 PM | Message # 7
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Origonal Request has been modified to show changes
 
Jace_VaritekDate: Thursday, 07 Oct 2010, 8:26 PM | Message # 8
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Looks good to me. I vote to APPROVE.
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OrionKarathDate: Thursday, 07 Oct 2010, 9:04 PM | Message # 9
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APPROVED
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