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Drug Cartel
GrahamDate: Saturday, 09 Jul 2011, 1:06 PM | Message # 1
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I'd like to request a Drug Cartel, with bases of operations on other planet's around Naboo, So that being Rori, and Ohma-D'un.

This character was made to give Mercutio some heat and stuff. I talked to Mercutio's player about it, I'm sure management knows who it is and he said it would be cool.

Perhaps a few hundred guards, scientist's in the hidden bunker's around the planets would be cool. With motion sensory technology. I'll add more as I think about it, right now im just throwing it our before I go to bed.

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Okay, now for some "Defenses" Um either I'd like it so the bunker's or building's that have Grahams supplies and such in it be like a restaurant, or have a clocking device, all of them. With a couple of auto-turret's set up disguised as... Let us say decoration?


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Jace_VaritekDate: Sunday, 10 Jul 2011, 8:23 PM | Message # 2
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Okay, I'm down for this idea. Let's pick a specific planet, though. Rori and Ohma-D'un are moons, as I'm sure you know. That's fine if it's what you want, although it seems to me the most logical place for a drug dealer to run his operations is on Chommell Minor, nearby. It's the sector capital and thus it's safe to assume 1.) it's population is a lot larger than Naboo's (thus, more "customers" for Graham), and 2.) it's the commercial center of the sector, and a lot of freight comes and goes from there (thus, easier for Graham to import some merchandise discreetly, and from there to elsewhere in the sector including, namely, Naboo). That's my recommendation, but it's your call. Either way, you probably do want a small operation on one of Naboo's moons. Just let us know which one, por favor.

As for the numbers, I don't think I'll approve of "hundreds" on a first request. Rather, I'd prefer to see you start small and then build up the organization over time (see Qual Ohnoka's recent requests for a similar example; he's been all over the RP now and he's built up his operation to about 90 to 100 people total). Also, explain what you mean by "scientists," please. I think you have a good idea with a restaurant, though. A restaurant (like I said, let's start out small here). But then you're going to need a paper trail and a money trail, from buying the restaurant, getting a license, etc. Logistically, a warehouse in Keren would be a lot simpler, and safer.

Also, FYI, cloaking devices are never approved, ever.

So, these are my preliminary thoughts on the request. I'll hold off on voting one way or another until we have a little more information from you. I see a lot of potential in this idea, though.


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OrionKarathDate: Sunday, 10 Jul 2011, 8:51 PM | Message # 3
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Jace has stole my thoughts, again... the damn mind reader. I'll try to impart some of my own thoughts once you've replied, don't want you to suffer from sensory overload. And yes, cloaking devices are never ever approved... I've tried, in one of our previous timelines... I'm pretty sure Jace, Karth, Jory, and Havoc (who was management at the time, I believe) all had a stroke when they saw that up there. Oh, TIE Phantoms... I loved you so... but the golden hammer had to ruin our affair before it even began...

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GrahamDate: Sunday, 10 Jul 2011, 9:23 PM | Message # 4
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I knew it was a longshot, but I figured I'd try. Anyways I got a bit more to add to it, so here they are.

How about we have it so that Graham is the owner of the biggest casino on Chommell Minor, which would attract people from Naboo and as a source of Revenue, which would be the base for his Drug Cartel, you know secret underground layer he "Added" surreptitiously. So the Gaming Commission wouldn't know about that.

Figured he'd start like that, and perhaps a restaurant on let's say Rori, where the drug's would be delivered personally, to the Spice Miner's Union bosses, which would be a part of it, as suggested by Jace. And approved by the Union boss typist. So I'd set up an interview about that.

How would that sound?

He'll expand eventually and either open more Casino's across the galaxy, or more Restaurants as bases.

Edit: Simpler: The Casino makes and funds the restaurant secretly, since they are both owned by Graham, After the drugs arrive at the restaurant on Rori, they'll be delivered to the spice miner's, which they'll put into containers, and ship across the galaxy where Graham has several men stationed to take the drugs from the container's disguised as other spice miners, or business men. Depending on where they are shipped to.


Zandro Graham.

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Karth_DeQoraDate: Sunday, 10 Jul 2011, 9:26 PM | Message # 5
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As the union president's typist, I'm okay with this.

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OrionKarathDate: Monday, 11 Jul 2011, 0:17 AM | Message # 6
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APPROVE

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Jace_VaritekDate: Monday, 11 Jul 2011, 0:34 AM | Message # 7
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I also vote to APPROVE, and thus the request is APPROVED. And with that, I'm way too tired to post anything else tonight. Goodnight, all.

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