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Telosian Security Forces & Others
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| Tremaine_Fowlkes | Date: Saturday, 10 Sep 2011, 9:06 AM | Message # 1 |
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| I would like to request a small, light fleet for Telos IV. It may be a planet in the Outer Rim, but it's consider vital to the Galactic Empire because it's a staging ground to keep the Outer Rim in control of the Empire. Which means there may be increased activities on pirate attacks and such, and I would prefer not to rely on an Imperial fleet to take care of whoever poses Telos IV a threat even though they're always welcomed to station a small fleet. The purpose of this request is strictly for planetary defense, and nothing more. Here's the following request:
1 Golan I space station
2 CR70s with a Vanguard c20 retrofit suite each
72 Planetary Defenders (12 each squadron)
24 BTL-S3 y-wings (12 each squadron)
200 Telosian security soldiers for TSF
15 BARC speeders (TSF patrols)
1 HAVw A5 Juggernaut
Citadel Station would be converted into one large museum, dedicated to the memory of playing an important role of Telosian planetary defense in Dark Wars and aftermath. This part would be elaborated in the Imperial Senate. In addition to that, I would like to request a Consular-class cruiser with a Charger c70 retrofit as Tremaine's new personal vessel.
Tremaine Fowlkes
Senator of Telos IV
Message edited by Tremaine_Fowlkes - Saturday, 10 Sep 2011, 9:07 AM |
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| Jace_Varitek | Date: Sunday, 11 Sep 2011, 7:59 PM | Message # 2 |
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| I'm good, and I APPROVE. However I would advise against listing your ground forces, A.) because realistically Telos IV has hundreds of thousands, if not millions of security personnel to keep the peace on a planet of 1 billion population, and also B.) as Rule 2.2 specifies, "in most instances, specific numbers of ground troops should not be specified, except in the instance of a particular battle (whereupon each combatant will state the number of troops, artillery and equipment being used for offense and defense, respectively"). That is, someone attacks a city on Telos IV, then you state how many troops, tanks, etc. are defending that place. It's a lot easier that way, and avoids having to keep track of millions of troops.
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| Tremaine_Fowlkes | Date: Tuesday, 13 Sep 2011, 6:37 AM | Message # 3 |
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| Good point, the numbers for the space fleet would remain the same. I'm gonna follow Jace's advice and withdraw the numbers for the TSF, but I would like to have it acknowledged that TSF has at least one HAVw A5 Juggernaut and BARC speeders in possession. Most likely, the TSF would have purchased them from the Empire when the Clone Wars models went out of phase in favor of newer models or has a preference for older models like the Empire chose to have an older speeder in favor of a BARC.
Tremaine Fowlkes
Senator of Telos IV
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| Karth_DeQora | Date: Wednesday, 14 Sep 2011, 7:50 PM | Message # 4 |
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| APPROVED.
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