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Request for Deamora
Captain_DeamoraDate: Wednesday, 26 Oct 2011, 9:49 PM | Message # 1
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I'd like to request a modified MedStar Class Frigate For Deamora, to act as a mobile base for a Black Ops command run by Deamora, which would allow the Empire to achieve goals that they technically wouldn't want to be publicly known or approved of by the Empire so the Empire can blame it on other "Rebel" Groups.

Name: Dark Whispers
Class: MedStar Frigate
Role: Medical Frigate, Black Ops Mobile Command Center

Length: 425 Meters
Cargo Capacity: 4,800 Tons
Consumables: 3 Years

Standard Compliment:
440 Crew
350 Storm Commandos (300 Base, with 50 to pilot the below AT-RTs, AT-PTs, and AT-STs)
x30 Z-74 Speeder Bikes
x20 AT-RTs
x20 AT-PTs
x6 AT-STs

Propulsion Systems:
Sublight Engines:
Hyperdrive: Class 1
Backup: Class 10

Systems:
x3 Tractor Beam Projectors

Armament
x4 Turbolaser Cannon Batteries
x2 Ion Cannon Batteries
x3 Point Defense Laser Cannon Batteries
x4 Proton Torpedo Tubes
- 5 Torpedos Each

Complement
x8 TIE Advanced X1
x2 Lambda Shuttles



Imperial Navy
Alzarin Deamora
Black Ops Commander


Message edited by Captain_Deamora - Thursday, 27 Oct 2011, 11:28 PM
 
Jace_VaritekDate: Thursday, 27 Oct 2011, 11:19 PM | Message # 2
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It looks good, mostly, but I'd like to suggest a couple of minor revisions if that's okay. 655 is definitely an improvement but still seems like a lot for covert operations. But I suppose it doesn't hurt to have more than you need. Even so, though, I'd prefer if you chose either Shadow Stormtroopers, Storm Commandos, or Imperial Navy Commandos, for the sake of simplicity. While I'll APPROVE of whichever of these you choose (except probably the Shadow Stormtroopers, to be honest, since it appears they have cloaking armor), I do vote to DENY the TIE Advanced X1's. Actually, no I don't. Changed my mind, ignore that part. So I guess I'm okay with it all though it's my personal preference (not requirement) to see the number of troops reduced. At least the permanent number, leaving open the possibility more can be assigned as needed.

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Karth_DeQoraDate: Friday, 28 Oct 2011, 10:13 PM | Message # 3
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APPROVE.

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Karth_DeQoraDate: Sunday, 30 Oct 2011, 8:12 PM | Message # 4
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APPROVED SO I CAN TIDY UP THE REQUEST BOARD.

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