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| Sevarius_Anderson | Date: Monday, 02 Jul 2012, 9:07 PM | Message # 1 |
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| Well, since I've found this unnecessary article on a Multi-Kilometer Star Destroyer and the article in total causing my mind to force me to come up with a full write up for it, I'd like to request the following, using the image and write up that I've come up with.
Multi-kilometer Star Destroyer Revenant Class Production information Manufacturer: Kuat Drive Yards Product line: Star Destroyers Class: Star Destroyer Technical specifications Length: 3,200 meters Maximum acceleration: >1,600 g MGLT: 50 MGLT Engine unit(s):
- KDY Destroyer-I ion engine (4)
- Cygnus Spaceworks Gemon-4 ion engine (5)
Hyperdrive rating:
- Class 2.0
- Backup Class 8.0
Shielding: KDY ISD-72x shield generator domes (2) (local area-effect) Sensor systems: KDY ISD-72x shield generator domes (2) Targeting systems: LeGrange targeting computers Armament:
- Dual heavy turbolaser turrets (10)
- Dual heavy ion cannon turrets (6)
- Taim & Bak XX-9 heavy turbolasers (50)
- Borstel NK-7 ion cannons (60)
- Phylon Q7 tractor beam projectors (16)
- Turbolaser Cannons (60)
- Point Defense Laser Cannons (100)
Complement:
- TIE/ln starfighter (108)
- TIE/sa bomber (24)
- TIE boarding craft (12)
- Lambda-class shuttles (8)
- Delta-class stormtrooper transports (15)
- Repair and recovery vehicles
- Various other support craft
- Theta-class AT-AT barges
- Sentinel-class landing craft (12)
- AT-AT walkers (20)[6]
- AT-ST walkers (30)[6]
- Prefabricated garrison base (1)
Crew:
- Officers (9,234)
- Infantry (9,700)
- Enlisted (69,700)
- Gunners (1,800)
Cargo capacity: 79,000 metric tons Consumables: 7 Years Communication systems: HoloNet transceiver Usage: Role(s): Era(s):
- Rise of the Empire era
- Rebellion era
Affiliation: Galactic Republic
Galactic Empire
And for good measure let's name it the Bilskirnir
Line Captain Anderson
Imperial Navy
Captain of the Endeavor
Message edited by Sevarius_Anderson - Sunday, 08 Jul 2012, 9:16 PM |
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| Jaron | Date: Sunday, 08 Jul 2012, 2:34 PM | Message # 2 |
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| That didn't quite fit the purpose of the unnecessary article contest, as a point to be made. It was more for things like spoons, or oxygen, gravity, etc. I might've said that already. Anyway, my rambling is done... give is a moment on this one; I'll review it tonight, and hopefully I can pull the other two amigos out from the rock from which they also receded.
Jaron Park
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| Jaron | Date: Sunday, 08 Jul 2012, 8:54 PM | Message # 3 |
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| Note that the page in question refers to Multi-kilometer Star Destroyers, not a Multi-kilometer Star Destroyer; plural, as in many, as in not one singular design. The impression I'm getting is that the article left you thinking that it referred to an undescriptive design out there rather than an article on a general subject. This is not a page needing stats, or any work on; again, it is about a subject, rather than a specific ship. That basis alone, voids the argument of this design. With that said, with the caveat that you come up with an original class name for the design, I will still seriously consider it.
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| Sevarius_Anderson | Date: Sunday, 08 Jul 2012, 9:17 PM | Message # 4 |
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| There we go. Placed under the Multi-Kilometer Star Destroyer title is Revenant Class for its design name
Line Captain Anderson
Imperial Navy
Captain of the Endeavor
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| Jace_Varitek | Date: Wednesday, 11 Jul 2012, 11:01 PM | Message # 5 |
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| I APPROVE of the design. I don't approve of Anderson having one, however.
Btw you have the shield generator domes repeated under the sensor section.
Jace Varitek
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My recent posts here, pre-2009 archives here
"When my information changes, I change my opinion. What do you do, sir?"
—John Maynard Keynes
Furthermore, a dancing Wookiee:
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| Karth_DeQora | Date: Wednesday, 11 Jul 2012, 11:07 PM | Message # 6 |
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| IT'S A ROCK, IT DOESN'T HAVE ANY VULNERABLE SPOTS!
Okay, no relevance to the actual request, but I can't help but quote the greatest movie of all time.
Man, Myth, Administrative God. Also plays a mean kazoo.
Jace Varitek: In Northern California we just have gangs of vigilante interior decorators.
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| Jaron | Date: Wednesday, 11 Jul 2012, 11:17 PM | Message # 7 |
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| Jace, the KDY Shield Generator Domes are also sensor towers. If you look at any Star Destroyer design specs, you will see the same repeat.
And... APPROVED!!! (But Anderson doesn't have one, right now).
Jaron Park
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