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Rath-DeschainDate: Monday, 07 Jun 2010, 2:40 PM | Message # 16
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The burly man chuckled and shook his head. Lifting an eyebrow, he looked the Sith over again and shook his head once more. There was always some upstart darksider, it seemed.

"You need to do your homework. Darth Novak was a Sith Lord as well, straight outta the Clone Wars, so he claimed. He had a planet backing him, as well as a large fleet, and he is so much dust in space around that planet now.

"You have... what? A deserted planet and two of you? Not too impressive. But let's hear this proposal. It will kill time till our friends get here to pick us up."


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JintaJidanDate: Monday, 07 Jun 2010, 2:55 PM | Message # 17
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Marco is not amused by this man gull and he paces around then opens his hand and calls apon the the darkside as his rage builds picking the poor man off the ground high into the air and with his eyes yellow and red with true hatred he gives this poor excuse a taste of his power by listening to the mans heartbeast and breathing then concentrating not on who he has on the air but of the men who are behind him by stopping their breathing closing off their airways.

"i hope for your sake you are not affraid of heights"

"but i now feel more comfortable getting your attention"

"and the purposal i have for you is this"

"either join my Syndicate or Die"

"plain and simple to the point"

"if you dont comply your men behind you will die"

"and i will have the pelasure of torturing you until i get the only result their is"

 
Rath-DeschainDate: Monday, 07 Jun 2010, 3:08 PM | Message # 18
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the brawny man had been expecting this sort of move. picked up as he was, he could keep little dignity. so that's the sort of deal it was... join the syndicate or die... there was always another option, and he needed to keep his crew safe long enough to get a message to trigger.

putting the gasps for air from his mind as he though quickly, the man nodded as best he could.

"we will join. let the boys go."


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JintaJidanDate: Monday, 07 Jun 2010, 3:20 PM | Message # 19
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"how do i know you will not just go for your weapons and fire apon me if i do"

"i want your ship in orbit to surrender as well"

"then i will release your men who are grasping for what air they have left"

"you joining the syndicate is a start"

"but if i dont have that ship up their in orbit"

"as a strong allie"

"then i will kill you and your men"

Marco pauses for a few moments taking a look at what he has infront of his plate then turns back to the man whom he has in the air.

"this is what will happen"

"while you are in the air and i have your friends grasping for a breath of air"

"i will toss you a comlink"

" in turn you will tell your ship their that you are safe"

"then tell your captain or whomever you have in charge"

"to come to these corodinates and join the Marauder Syndicate"

"if i dont hear a yes to join,i think you know the outcome"

Marco has everything to lose if his asumption isnt correct but hes a gambling Sith Lord he doesnt care of the Sith who were infront of him this is the now not the past he is the new and more powerful Sith lord he has no fleet but he does have a planet and this planet is his playing field he has had alot of time to know its secrets.

 
Rath-DeschainDate: Monday, 07 Jun 2010, 3:33 PM | Message # 20
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"they won't join... i can tell you that already. trigger is smarter than that. he's loyal to hejin and to the ebon fist. he's not about to land, whether you kill us or not. hell, take the blasters in the ship if you want.

"i can't guarantee anyone else arriving though. besides, if we go missing long enough, hejin will bring the fleet here and then you'll be stuck between a rock and a hard place. he has more than enough hardware to dismantle your ship in orbit and do a damned good job of burning this planet.

"why don't you keep this ship and let us go? it would be more beneficial to you."


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JintaJidanDate: Monday, 07 Jun 2010, 4:23 PM | Message # 21
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Marco considers the options of a bigger fleet coming here and he shakes his head the man suggestions is good enough having them join the syndicate is what he wanted he now has more then he had before but he does need more he wants the ship in orbit to come hear he closes his eyes and releases the men from his deadly grasp allowing them to gain the air they need to survive he then lowers his hand which gradually lowers the man who was in the air to the ground safely.

"I have your word you have joined my Syndicate"

Marco weighs the options that he has before him he has now a company of eight but he needs more and he wonders how he will get it perhaps the men he has released from his grasp will provide the answer.

"what would make your captain or whomever is in charge of you"

"of joining my Syndicate"

Marco then pauses for that one moment of hearing he wants to be let go to leave that isnt an option he is willing to do and he will tell him so.

"i am not prepared to let you just walk away its either the Syndicate or death your choice"

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i was extremely shocked when i saw this dirty figure of a man being raised up into the air by my master and the other six being crippled by my master's power their breathing was rapid and then shallow as they tried to gasp for breathes it was so intruiging of how my master was able to do that and talk at the same time to actually hold a conversations with two things on his mind the removing of air from six individuals as well as one in the air i was so impressed, then i noticed my master removed the grip he had on them and it was over the deed i guess was done so i moved around the ship to my master's side looking at what else to come infront of him and what i was going to learn.

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Rath-DeschainDate: Monday, 07 Jun 2010, 4:57 PM | Message # 22
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rubbing his throat, the burly man shook his head, glancing skywards as if trying to spot the ship that would be his salvation from this predicament.

"there is nothing that would make him join... the ebon fist is already serving someone... someone who is more powerful than you. he also has a good chunk of money to fund us, which helps.

"i don't see them flocking to you."


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JintaJidanDate: Tuesday, 08 Jun 2010, 12:16 PM | Message # 23
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"he may have the funds i seek"

"but no Sith lord is as powerful as me"

"this Darth you spoke of earlier,he had a fleet and yet he failed to complete his dream"

"my dream is simple,gain funds grow the syndicate,raid many planets within this system or any other"

"if this syndicate grows large enough whomever joins me can feel confident of taking on only one mission"

"wiping out the Jedi,the Senate,and any other form of political roadblocks"

"thus making a galaxy that a Mercenary and Sith Lord could appreciate peace at long last"

"not Sith rule"

Marco walks over to his apprentice backing away from the men whom he has just released perhaps giving them an option of joining him still exsists if their is any at all then he turns to the small temple that he found and uses the power of the dark side of the force as the ruins of the old temple move and lift up in the air he removes the walls until he releases the power of the darkside to reveal some treasures his own personal funds gold and jewels its a small bounty but he knows their is much more in the galaxy but he needs an income and having mercenaries at 15% might do the trick.

"if i have you within this syndicate"

"then whatever we find as a whole you keep 35% of whatever we find i keep the rest"

"their is no orders i will not be giving any out the only way this syndicate thrives is through suggestion of where we as a whole should raid next"

"take this comlink make contact with your ship up their tell them your safe"

 
Rath-DeschainDate: Tuesday, 08 Jun 2010, 3:48 PM | Message # 24
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"i didn't say he was a sith lord. he's... something different."

taking the comlink carefully, the brawny man stared at it for a long moment, then clicked it on and raised it to his mouth.

"bravo-six-eight. we are safe for the time being."

no response came back through the communicator though, for the code he'd spoken at the beginning was the signal that they'd been captured, but were not in extreme danger for the moment.

"my men and i have promised to work in your syndicate. that doesn't mean i'll trap the rest of the ebon fist into your workings. you may have funds eventually, but the fist's patron is already wealthy. you haven't seen what he can do..."

there was fear in the man's voice as he spoke.


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JintaJidanDate: Thursday, 10 Jun 2010, 6:58 PM | Message # 25
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Marco calms himself down its not his fault for being so angry all the time and of course he took this too the extreme but thats his hatred for everyone and everything that is something he will have to control if his plan for his syndicate is to survive he looks at the man and his men whom he had released his deadly grip on and then to his apprentice whom is no longer at his side he turns back to the task at hand.

"its better if we speak within the ruins of this old temple"

"about this Syndicate of mine, and of your suggestions of what i should do next"

"I know i will needs plenty of funds money to keep this thing going"

"so id like to hear some suggestions from a mercenaries point of view"

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It didnt take that long my master was looking at our future and i decided i needed more time of studying the abilities i have elarned over the course of this first year so i left my masters side to do that i knew my master could handle himself he didnt need my help but i guess i should have stayed around to watch how to bargin with mercenaries but i can do whenever the time comes im sure of it.

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Rath-DeschainDate: Friday, 11 Jun 2010, 7:43 AM | Message # 26
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feeling safe knowing none of the other members of the fist would fall into the trap, the burly man thought for a long moment. he was a button man and not too much of a thinker.

"well, you need to advertise and start doing jobs. that way your syndicate gets heard about and you can pull more cash in from getting hired."


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JintaJidanDate: Friday, 11 Jun 2010, 2:39 PM | Message # 27
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Marco realizes that he might be being decieved here but he has no choice he has to get his syndicate going and getting suggestions even from this band of six is better then anything he now knows what he has to do he has to leave Lehon its a good hiding spot but its not very pratical of waiting around for people to come to him he has done that once already but he now knows he has to leave his hide out and go beyond the confinds of this system perhaps he needs to find other smugglers perhaps he needs to make a trip to Tattooine, or even Mandalore and speak to an old friend of his.

"so then thats is what we shall do"

"at least thats what i will do once you and your men leave Lehon"

"and head back to your ship"

"now.....remove all of your weapons and your clothes"

"drop them infront of me and leave"

"head in that direction four miles away from this area and call for a rescue"

Marco then stares at the poor man who had joined his syndicate but he has changed his mind he will take the ship that is disabled on the ground and use it for parts he will then use their weapons and clothes for various disguises once he in fact leaves Lehon and branches out for now giving the Ebon Fists its men back is the right choice for him and his apprentice as he has some sort of change of heart and he knows these men infront of him are not comepletely on his side he will not be decieved letting them go with only their skin is the right choice.

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I was using my skills and abilities and i overheard what my master was saying i was so cunfused first he had them join our clan and now their leaving i wonder what was going on but i did not want to confront my master about this because that would lead me to my early death for now i will watch and learn and i guess i should get back to my studies i just hope my master knows what he is doing.

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Rath-DeschainDate: Friday, 11 Jun 2010, 4:45 PM | Message # 28
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beginning to strip off their clothing and having no weaponry on them, for they'd left it all on board the vessel, they were only too happy to comply with the request.

looking at the ship for a long moment, the rather naked burly man shook his head, then looked back at the aspiring sith lord.

"it won't fly well with the front smashed in like that. and it's missing a turret. well, good luck to you sith. maybe your presence in the galaxy will mean more work for us."

forming the men up, he led them off at a trot to the point where they could be picked up by trigger and the larger transport.

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beginning to strip off their clothing and having no weaponry on them, for they'd left it all on board the vessel, they were only too happy to comply with the request.

looking at the ship for a long moment, the rather naked burly man shook his head, then looked back at the aspiring sith lord.

"it won't fly well with the front smashed in like that. and it's missing a turret. well, good luck to you sith. maybe your presence in the galaxy will mean more work for us."

forming the men up, he led them off at a trot to the point where they could be picked up by trigger and the larger transport.

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beginning to strip off their clothing and having no weaponry on them, for they'd left it all on board the vessel, they were only too happy to comply with the request.

looking at the ship for a long moment, the rather naked burly man shook his head, then looked back at the aspiring sith lord.

"it won't fly well with the front smashed in like that. and it's missing a turret. well, good luck to you sith. maybe your presence in the galaxy will mean more work for us."

forming the men up, he led them off at a trot to the point where they could be picked up by trigger and the larger transport.

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beginning to strip off their clothing and having no weaponry on them, for they'd left it all on board the vessel, they were only too happy to comply with the request.

looking at the ship for a long moment, the rather naked burly man shook his head, then looked back at the aspiring sith lord.

"it won't fly well with the front smashed in like that. and it's missing a turret. well, good luck to you sith. maybe your presence in the galaxy will mean more work for us."

forming the men up, he led them off at a trot to the point where they could be picked up by trigger and the larger transport.

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beginning to strip off their clothing and having no weaponry on them, for they'd left it all on board the vessel, they were only too happy to comply with the request.

looking at the ship for a long moment, the rather naked burly man shook his head, then looked back at the aspiring sith lord.

"it won't fly well with the front smashed in like that. and it's missing a turret. well, good luck to you sith. maybe your presence in the galaxy will mean more work for us."

forming the men up, he led them off at a trot to the point where they could be picked up by trigger and the larger transport.

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beginning to strip off their clothing and having no weaponry on them, for they'd left it all on board the vessel, they were only too happy to comply with the request.

looking at the ship for a long moment, the rather naked burly man shook his head, then looked back at the aspiring sith lord.

"it won't fly well with the front smashed in like that. and it's missing a turret. well, good luck to you sith. maybe your presence in the galaxy will mean more work for us."

forming the men up, he led them off at a trot to the point where they could be picked up by trigger and the larger transport.

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beginning to strip off their clothing and having no weaponry on them, for they'd left it all on board the vessel, they were only too happy to comply with the request.

looking at the ship for a long moment, the rather naked burly man shook his head, then looked back at the aspiring sith lord.

"it won't fly well with the front smashed in like that. and it's missing a turret. well, good luck to you sith. maybe your presence in the galaxy will mean more work for us."

forming the men up, he led them off at a trot to the point where they could be picked up by trigger and the larger transport.

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beginning to strip off their clothing and having no weaponry on them, for they'd left it all on board the vessel, they were only too happy to comply with the request.

looking at the ship for a long moment, the rather naked burly man shook his head, then looked back at the aspiring sith lord.

"it won't fly well with the front smashed in like that. and it's missing a turret. well, good luck to you sith. maybe your presence in the galaxy will mean more work for us."

forming the men up, he led them off at a trot to the point where they could be picked up by trigger and the larger transport.

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beginning to strip off their clothing and having no weaponry on them, for they'd left it all on board the vessel, they were only too happy to comply with the request.

looking at the ship for a long moment, the rather naked burly man shook his head, then looked back at the aspiring sith lord.

"it won't fly well with the front smashed in like that. and it's missing a turret. well, good luck to you sith. maybe your presence in the galaxy will mean more work for us."

forming the men up, he led them off at a trot to the point where they could be picked up by trigger and the larger transport.

Added (11 Jun 2010, 5:44 PM)
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beginning to strip off their clothing and having no weaponry on them, for they'd left it all on board the vessel, they were only too happy to comply with the request.

looking at the ship for a long moment, the rather naked burly man shook his head, then looked back at the aspiring sith lord.

"it won't fly well with the front smashed in like that. and it's missing a turret. well, good luck to you sith. maybe your presence in the galaxy will mean more work for us."

forming the men up, he led them off at a trot to the point where they could be picked up by trigger and the larger transport.

Added (11 Jun 2010, 5:45 PM)
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beginning to strip off their clothing and having no weaponry on them, for they'd left it all on board the vessel, they were only too happy to comply with the request.

looking at the ship for a long moment, the rather naked burly man shook his head, then looked back at the aspiring sith lord.

"it won't fly well with the front smashed in like that. and it's missing a turret. well, good luck to you sith. maybe your presence in the galaxy will mean more work for us."

forming the men up, he led them off at a trot to the point where they could be picked up by trigger and the larger transport.

Added (11 Jun 2010, 5:45 PM)
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beginning to strip off their clothing and having no weaponry on them, for they'd left it all on board the vessel, they were only too happy to comply with the request.

looking at the ship for a long moment, the rather naked burly man shook his head, then looked back at the aspiring sith lord.

"it won't fly well with the front smashed in like that. and it's missing a turret. well, good luck to you sith. maybe your presence in the galaxy will mean more work for us."

forming the men up, he led them off at a trot to the point where they could be picked up by trigger and the larger transport.


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JintaJidanDate: Friday, 11 Jun 2010, 5:26 PM | Message # 29
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Marco then thinks more and changes his mind again he lifts up his arm and opens his hand and this point he lift up all seven men off the ground and holds them in place as he walks up and around them he stares at them what has he done first being decieved then allowing these men to leave and now he confused but no more he has to be hard on the men whom he has now trapped once again in the air as he is using the powers of the Darkside of the force.

"seeing how when you called apon your ship"

"i sensed that you were not really serious about joining my syndicate"

"the only reason you agreed was to see how i would react to you"

"did you really think id allow you all to leave just as quick as that"

he gets angry at the deception of these men who do they think they are after all he has them on his planet he is not that affraid of this Ebon Fist he could care less about who their leader is he knows he is but one man and he doesnt have a fleet but he is also a sith lord and he will get what he wants sooner rather then later.

"you will contact your ship up their in orbit"

"you will get your commander down here"

"and he will in turn surrender himself to me as a servant of the Marauder Syndicate"

"or i will kill you and your men right here right now"

Marco concentrates on the power of the darkside once again but only grasps the six men behind the guy he was talking to before he concentrates on taking their breathe away and to slower the heatbeats as a sign that he doesnt like being decieved this will show these men that he is in control here and if the six die then so be it he wants the leader of the Ebon fist eye to eye to him with no tricks.

 
Rath-DeschainDate: Friday, 11 Jun 2010, 7:03 PM | Message # 30
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the burly man looked over his shoulder at the men gsping for air, ten back to the sith lord. the man wanted trigger to land so he could capture the man and the crew, as well as have a heavily armed vessel. looking at the sith lord, he shook his head.

"he won't come... and i won't bring the rest of the men into a trap. i have a duty to the group, and if you kill my men, i'll fight you with every breath in my body.

"kill us and atropos will come for you anyway. you'll regret it."


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