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Murderous Intent
Jared_TallonDate: Thursday, 14 May 2009, 1:50 AM | Message # 1
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Corellia
Coronet City
Blue Sector

Coronet City was alive with the night. The glitter of the city was hardly more evident than within the Blue Sector, home of the multitude of illegal and legal activities available to sentient beings. People gathered in Treasure Ship Row, spending hard-earned credits at the various stores that offered everything from clothing to antiques and everything imaginable in-between. A myriad of cantinas served drinks from across the galaxy and their walkways were adorned by drunkards stumbling from cantina to cantina or, in some cases, drunkards who were hurled out by bouncers and bodyguards. The Fel Swoop was one such cantina, frequented by various swoop gang members. As such, it was a popular place if someone wanted to see a nice little fight unfold. Oddly enough though, the Row was one of the safer places within Blue Sector. Outside the Row, various casinos and mega casinos served to allow citizens and off-worlders to blow away their credits at hopes and dreams of hitting the big jackpot and walking away rich. Of course, when groups such as the Exchange and Black Sun had a hand in things, nobody ever really went home rich. As much business as the casinos drew, the brothels did almost as well, where any sentient with a sense of low morals could go and pay to do practically anything for an hour or two. On the outskirts was the Pit, a rather expansive junkyard where all manner of damaged good and a goodly number of recently-deceased sentients were dumped. Most of these sentients had hardly died from a simple overdose. Blaster burns and stab wounds were the primary causes of death here. Indeed, the Blue Sector could be quite well described as a hive of scum and villainy.

It was on the outskirts, practically boarding the Pit, where the focus was for a select few this night. A few run-down warehouses that had once held smuggled and stolen good for a number of swoop gangs prior to the New Republic's rise to power were now empty and devoid of life. The swoop gangs in question had engaged in their own little private wars, been killed off or joined other gangs and were quite a distant memory. The warehouses had fallen into disrepair, serving as an area for the odd clandestine meeting and as a place where unfortunate people were taken and beaten when they didn't pay their collection money on time. If walls could tell stories, these would speak tales of woe and despair. Fortunately, walls can't speak, so nobody had to listen. Tonight though... tonight the walls were able to behold a rather different spectacle. Tonight was something of an odd treat. Instead of a thug, lowlife or some poor drifter, there was a rather highly placed secretary to the Senator of Corellia. This man was a rather good worker who did his job diligently and well. His reports were filed, his suits were clean and pressed and he was a man of great ingenuity and breeding. His only vice, unfortunately, was that he was unmarried and happened to enjoy the company of women who were paid for what they offered. It was this lust which resulted in him being quite nude, hanging by his wrists in manacles that were hooked to the ceiling by industrial-strength chains.

Oblivious to the secretary's panicked and increasingly loud questions was the man who sat on a simple metal folding chair, studying him as he hung helpless. This man was dressed entirely in black, the heavy material resembling something from an industrial slaughterhouse, his head topped by a rather useful helmet that was adorned within by enough gadgets to make a Mandalorian warrior jealous. His thoughts were not upon the man. Instead, his mind was far away, on a vacation once taken on Chandrila. Ah, those were the days when he'd been much younger and things had seemed so much easier. The sobbing of the man before him brought him back to the present and the feeling of lingering happiness was instead replaced by annoyance. Shaking his head slightly, the Night Surgeon stood, popping open a cold storage container with his foot before advancing towards the hapless man. Picking up a rod that was roughly two hands long and tipped at either end with a blade, he circled once, pausing finally as he came to stand in front of the secretary.

"Why are you doing this? I can be well ransomed! The government will pay a lot of credits for my safe return! The Senator will-"

"Silence your tongue, or I'll cut it out." The sharply delivered words cut off the secretary's pathetic pleas instantly. Looking into the man's eyes from behind the blue-tinged, armored visor plate, his own eyes obscured by the glowing light, the surgeon sighed. It was a matter of conscience, he supposed, that he give all the future departed a simple reason why he did what he did. Sometimes it was on a whim, sometimes it was business and sometimes it was justice. There was no discerning on where and when and how he picked his targets.

"You are here, secretary, not because you are hated. You are here simply because you were in the wrong place at the wrong time. Palpatine was in the wrong place at the wrong time, and he was thrown bouncing and screaming and quite unable to help himself, into the reactor core of the Death Star. You, secretary, were in the wrong place at the wrong time and you, quite like Palpatine, will die screaming and unable to help yourself. The only difference is that the more you struggle, the longer it will take for me to make precise cuts. It may comfort you some, but you'll probably be dead before I remove your heart and kidneys."

The look of horror on the man's face was quite amusing, but there was no point in reveling in this. It was simply as the surgeon had said; the wrong place and the wrong time. This wasn't an instance where it was time to play a game. It needed to be simple and quick so that he could get off-world and on to his next destination. The knife flashed out and upwards, genetically-perfect muscles powering the non-powered blade. A quick step backward ensured escaping the glut of blood that emerged from the precise wound that bisected the secretary from his groin to his throat. The surgeon had lied slightly. Between shock and massive trauma, the secretary never had any real time to scream. The blade had been extremely sharp and the bones of the ribcage were severed just as easily as skin. Once the blood had slowed, the surgeon went about with the careful removal of organs, placing them within the cold storage container. Who could say what the next stop would bring?


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Garik_TaynorDate: Thursday, 14 May 2009, 3:49 PM | Message # 2
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"If walls could talk, eh Garik?"

"If walls could talk, we'd be out of a job," Taynor answered grimly, his hands buried in the pockets of his trench coat as he glanced down at the duracrete floor, still crimsoned with blood despite several attempts to clean it up in the hours since the murder was reported, holographed and investigated. His eyes gazed from beneath the brim of his hat; in his fifty years, he'd seen too many murders with those eyes, and they were tired and grey―as grey as his hair, or as grey as the duracrete before this poor bastard had bled all over it.

"I guess so," the other man said, as he lighted a cigarette. He was about the same age as Taynor and wore a similar trench coat, except his had a uniform beneath it. Garrison. He was Taynor's partner once, in better times. Well, as good as times could be on the homicide beat. A lot had changed between them since then; more than just their line of work.

"Still smoking," Taynor noted aloud, without looking at him.

"That's right," Garrison answered him, with a hint of defiance in his voice. "Nasty habit, I know. But I guess we all have our nasty habits, don't we?"

What's that supposed to mean? Taynor didn't bother to ask; he already knew exactly what it meant. Just being back in Coronet after all this time made him want to reach for his flask, but now he refused to give Garrison the satisfaction of seeing him do it, the smug bastard. Maybe he was imagining things. He had felt defensive ever since he'd first stepped off the transport and breathed Corellia's air again. "Not as nasty as the perp who did this," he changed the subject, glancing over the crime scene.

"Yeah, real head case."

"Any thoughts on a motive?" Taynor asked, his low, gravelly voice echoing throughout the cavernous room. He looked contemplatively toward the ceiling, the walls, the door to the warehouse and the forensics team searching the area unsuccessfully for prints. "Can't be for money. Human organs aren't worth much of anything when you can grow them in a lab for a quarter the price. Hell, you can grow them in your basement, if you're into that kind of thing. As many as you need, too."

"Political?"

"I doubt it. Sure, this guy works for a Senator, but you know the syndicates don't work like this, especially not with politicians. There's no need for it; they scare easy. Besides, it's too conspicuous."

"Like I said," Garrison shrugged. "Head case, then. Has to be."

"Knows his stuff, though," Garik mused, taking off his hat for a moment and running his fingers through his thinning, grey hair. "Cuts are precise, no prints, no one saw him, not even a holocam. He's done this before, maybe a hobby of his, or hers. You should look for similar, recent cases. Might be a pattern to it. Usually is. Probably not on Corellia though; you can't pull off this sort of thing in the same place too many times before someone sees you, or the law gets wise. You probably want to start by checking on the victim's movements, last time he was seen, and who with. Might find―"

"I'm sure you didn't come here to do my job for me," Garrison interrupted him with a laugh, somewhat maliciously, Garik thought. An awkward silence filled the warehouse for a moment.

"You know good and well why I'm here," Taynor said, after a pause. "I didn't come here to see a goddamn crime scene; there's a reason I don't work here anymore."

"Yes there is," Garrison mumbled. He noticed Taynor's incensed glare suddenly upon him and, sensing (correctly) that he had crossed the line, he put a hand on his old colleague's shoulder and quickly deflected the subject. "How about we get a steak, like old times? You hungry? The diner's still open, after all these years."

Taynor returned his hat to his head, nodded almost imperceptibly and walked back toward the door through which they'd entered. Garrison only sighed, dropped his cigarette to the floor and stepped on it, and followed Garik out.



Lieutenant Garik Taynor
Coruscant Security Force
Homicide, Larceny, Special Cases


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Jack_BurnmanDate: Thursday, 14 May 2009, 5:10 PM | Message # 3
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"Why out of all places did we decide to come back HERE?" The annoyed rookie of T&S had muttered to himself as he walked down the street, kicking a lonesome can down the street. Garik had mentioned going somewhere for a while, but refused to give comment as to what exactly it was he was going. Not like Jack cared or anything, he hated Corellia. But his hate was self-imposed; he was the reason Corellia hated him. But it's a good thing that not many people could remember what had happened. And thus that since he grew up a little, he was a little hard to identify. Finally he got bored of the can and kicked it to the side as he continued his walk down the side-walk. He took a left and returned to a busted up vehicle that his parents had given him; his father's hand-me-down... and boy was it in bad shape.

As he approached it, there was a pink slip on his vehicle. "A fricken parking violation?!" Jack cried out, gripping the piece of paper in his hand. He looked at the meter to see it was still full. "If it's full, then what the hell..." Behind him there was another speeder that had dents in it. Looking at it, the owner of it tapped Jack on his shoulder and as he turned around, the man go tin his face. "Look what you did to my car! Oh you're in a lot of crap my friend, and I ment deep in the pit!" The man's bright red face only glowed brighter thanks to the sun light that was present. Jack only grinned and backed towards the driver side door. "Uh listen... friend... the cops have my info... just bill them." He got into the vehicle, only to have the man yell aimlessly at him "What do you mean they have your info?! Are you on drugs or something?! You just hit my speeder, I want your information myself, buddy!!!". Jack turned around and smiled.

Putting it in reverse, his speeder went back at full speed, adding more damage to it. He looked to see the man's face, and his mouth was wide open. Laughing, Jack kicked it into drive and then sped out of the area, only to have the man yell at him and flip off Burnman. The busted up speeder then begun to kick and scream; the engine making a very annoying noise for a few minutes. Sighing some, he begun to second guess himself. Maybe backing up into the nice speeder wasn't such a good idea... he just scratched the paint on Jack's busted up piece of junk... well... what was left of it. Jack was surprised that nothing was falling off yet. "Thanks a lot... pops..." Jack said as everyone kept looking at him in their speeders, making gestures and comments about 'hot' his speeder was. He simply ignored, as he glanced down at his watch he noticed that he was going to be late. Even though Garik didn't mention where he was going, he told Jack where to meet afterwards. And when they would finally reunite, Jack would plead and beg the senior to leave Corellia.

And off Jack would go, his speeder kicking down all the way to the meeting spot. "I really hate this place... for chrip sake, Garik!" Shouted the rookie again...


Mmmmmm... ribs....

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Jared_TallonDate: Tuesday, 14 Jul 2009, 11:23 AM | Message # 4
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Nathan Wallace gently placed the cold container that held several useful organs inside a specialized smuggling compartment before closing it up and locking it with the biometric scanner. When compared to most vessels, the Scalpel was quite heavily armed. As a modified YT-2000 light freighter, the Scalpel was quite capable of outgunning most craft its size, which was perfect as its owner spent a lot of time in the Outer Rim and away from areas the law controlled. Armed with a pair of Corellian Engineering Corporation AG-2G quad laser cannons (one dorsal and one ventral), an additional laser cannon alongside the cockpit (which was mirrored on the opposite side by an ion cannon) and two concussion missile tubes, the Scalpel could take care of itself between its increased armaments and modified maneuverability. For Wallace, this simply meant that his business of saving lives could be continued more efficiently and without issues.

It was odd for him to remain on a world where a crime of a certain sort had been committed, but these days, the old hit-and-run approach was not as exciting as it had once been. With over twenty systems visited and one-hundred-eighty deaths counted, it seemed as if the business was losing its fun. Oh, to be sure, there were always those to whom he could sell the organs for dirt cheap. Not all worlds had organ fabricators, and many people thought it payed to keep a stock of them offhand. Those payments kept him rolling along. If he wanted extra cash, he'd unzip a few people, so to speak, and appropriate their funds. He received more joy for healing people without payment, which was an oddity perhaps.

Returning to his recreational area on-board the ship, Wallace settled down and began flipping through the various Holonet channels that involved Corellia. There was still no breaking news as of yet. Odd. Very odd. Did they know more than they were letting on? Was this a ploy to keep him lulled into a false sense of security? Or did they actually have no clue still and had chosen to not make the news public? Ah, it was all such a beautifully complicated guessing game.

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It would see that the investigation on Corellia had come to an end. There was no new news on the holonet stations. All focus these days was on some Sith and the planet Druckenwell. Perhaps in hindsight, it was a fortunate opportunity that would allow Tallon to continue his work without hindering his legitimate healing. Having paid up his bill on the docking bay, Tallon prepared the preflight checklist, ready to take his vessel elsewhere. This hunting ground was tapped out for the time being.

His choice of worlds was rather restricted in some ways. The Remnant was never too friendly, but the New Republic was cracking down on things too. Ah, well. What was a man to do other than keep on truckin'.


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