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Let it Snow, Let it Snow, Let it Snow..
Celise_ShinzonDate: Thursday, 03 Dec 2009, 9:44 AM | Message # 1
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Episode I: Nightmares and Realities

With a scream, Shinzon sat bolt upright in her bed. Mingled brown and chalk white hair was brushed from her face as she took several labored breaths. Wiping a cold sweat from her forehead she let out a groan of frustration before a faint mechanized clickt was heard as her mechanized right arm met with her left and she buried her head in her hands. A length of time passed before Shinzon stood and padded over to the synthesizer. "Coffee.. Black."

"Make it yourself."

"Not now T-92. Override."

The sound of what could of been proscribed even by Imperial standards as stiff and tepid coffee begrudgingly poured into a cup. Pulling on her clothes, Celise stretched and checked the the clock.

"4:00 AM.."

Groaning with defeat, she locked her Lightsaber into its customary place and cast a black over-robe over her shoulders. Walking with all the grace of a constipated Bantha to the Synthesizer she siezed the Coffee and gulped it with a greedy slurp.

For some reason or another she chose that minute to look up and grunted. A face of tired lines, and dark circles under the eyes greeted her. Between that and the White hair, she couldnt help mumbling outloud to herself.

"All but accepted the Darkside now.. minus the smashing yellow eyes. You ever have mornings like this..?"

Whomever Celise was speaking to didnt return a reply. But as she repaired and washed away the vestiges of a poor sleep with cold water, Celise could not help but note the resemblence. She really was starting to take after her mother in appearance. Exempting the white hair, all she really would of needed to pull a good Vorhn impersonation off was a suit of Vaderish Armor and of course the smashing hell-blazer yellow eyes.

Snorting to herself a look of disgust crossed her face and she looked away finishing the coffee off. That really was what it was all about wasnt it? Every time she looked in the mirror, she remembered that which she sought to forget. Like a cancer of the mind it crawled and wormed its way through her brain with a nagging voice. Since she'd crashed her ship eight and a half years ago, she had been very pleased that her ties had been severed.

She had of course taken the proper procedures before departure, and notified the Order of her intent to go into exile, but she had not elaborated on the where..

Setting her coffee mug down, she shook her head. It was that biting sense of failure again. The Deralia business still plagued her mind. Rolling her eyes she made the rounds of her quarters, cleaning it with the customary zeal. How long had it been since then?

Celise had no idea, but she did know that she was sick from it. Obi-wan once had said he was too old for this sort of thing, and Celise mentally felt that. She hadnt touched anything related to the Jedi Redeemers since then. The official count was eight years and twenty nine days, but Celise had never bothered to count. She invariably knew in the pit of her stomach that it'd been a long time. It was fine in her mind also. She didnt intend to return any time soon. For who wanted to return to the Order if only to be reminded again of youthful exuberance and spectacular failure?

~Afraid..?~

This was precisely what it was. She had failed to save her father, and the weight of that crushed. Compounded with her mother's history, it seemed that she was quite of the mind that the best place for a Shinzon or a Vorhn was where she had gone. Away. Away from all of it. Adventure. Excitement. A Jedi craved none of these things. Neither did she, but she had a hard time calling herself a "Jedi" now. A Jedi was a paragon, someone able to act. Someone who could lead and fight for those who could not. Celise could not do any of those things to her mind, and thus she felt she had lost the honor of being called "Jedi".

No.. crazy hermit bitch with a Lightsaber summed her up better now.

Peering out the window, a snowstorm raged. In response Celise began to don Thermal gear from her home. She'd found the place in a small canyon based off of one of her mother's old recordings. Eight years ago the place had been a musty drafty wreck with kowakian snow spiders and the occasional Bantha using the old hangar. Today eight years later lined with furs and amenities borrowed from various Rebel Bases, it was home.

The inner toils of the heart, the whims of the Force, these things paled in comparison to the fury of the elements. The fight for survival that she had when she stepped out of that cabin. This primal sense of survival, this sense of deattachment from everything, and the raw feeling of complete accountability. This was what she'd craved..

And the planet Hoth had not disappointed.

Some time Later..

It would have appeared comedic really had any of the Order seen it. A small black dot, trudging doggedly across a large white sea, dragging a small skiff with it. Up to her knees in the snow, Celise slogged across the vast expanse of the frozen hell. Despite the cold weather, she was in a fine mood for a change. The darkness of the nightmares had given way to the practicalities of the day. A dull scraping noise echoed across the valley as durasteel sleds skidded unforgivingly on compacted snow. She could of course probably have utilized some repulsor lifts to make her labor easier, caught or domesticated a Taun-taun, or perhaps even indulged in the use of the Force to speed along the work, but in going to exile, Celise had decided long ago to make do with only the barest of nessecities.

Though her studies of the Redeemer Holocron had enabled her to successfully mask her presence in the Force, she doubted the wisdom of becoming so reliant on the Force. In this she was perhaps becoming more like her father, and bearing the seeds of what in his case became a desire to destroy the Force. The Force after all was a tool, not a crutch; and it was with some measure of pride and perhaps her mother's damned stubborness that Celise felt great pleasure in ekking out a survival on Hoth with little to no aid from the Force.

Sometimes less was more..

Wiping some snow from her hood Celise paused before sea green eyes peered against the white glare ahead of her to a small red light that flashed in the distance. A echo of a smile crossed her lips before with a renewed exertion of strength she rewrapped the rope around her arms and pulled the sled slowly toward her destination. With a dull shrakking sound the metal broke from the ice it had attached to in the short span of time, and the march continued on as a cold wind caused the snow to churn and rise in a powdery nimbus of a minor windstorm. It was cold, but not cold enough to kill, Though Celise knew if she strayed out after dark, not even the Force would save her from the sub-zero climate.

The trek to the marker took about ten minutes, but from there Shinzon could not rest as the marker was merely the first of eight which she employed to find her way in the white desert. A oxidizing compound coating the posts ensured that even in a snow storm the posts would not be buried. Originally it was a part of a old signalling strip which the rebellion had likely used during the war with the Galactic Empire. Nowadays the Rebellion had little use for it, likely having vacated it when Vader himself came to Hoth.

Reaching the final Marker Celise slid the sled off of the snow drift and onto the durasteel strip that surrounded the pillar. This was all that was exposed on the landscape of this particular installation, for the Rebel engineers had realized when they built this particular installation that building under the frozen earth of Hoth was invariably better than building on the surface. Much as Celise's hut was nestled into one of the ice canyons and difficult if not impossible to spot from the air, this installation would of appeared to merely be a weather vein or a barometric reading post to a Imperial Recon bot. Hunching down near the base of the pillar, a security code was punched in. To Celise's glee, as it had every single other time the locks clicked and the hatch slid open.

One of the first things Celise had done when she first arrived on Hoth was to investigate the old Rebel bases. As she had once defected from the Empire to assist the Rebellion, she had been as many stationed on Hoth. And like every single other member of the Rebellion she was made aware of certain codes and entrances which the "live-in Crew" required to see to the day to day matters of survival on Hoth. Back then she had been a mechanic and fighter pilot.. though those days by comparison now seemed a fond memory of far happier times. Either way it never failed to bring a smile to her face to find that her old security codes from the War still worked to grant her clearance to the compound. It was like a old friend welcoming her home in this regard.

Descending the stairway, Celise shook herself out as low-light from the auxilliary batteries flickered on. If there was one good thing to be said for Rebel tech, it was spartan and built to last. Dusting off herself she pulled a fur-lined muffler down and glanced around the area. In the days of the Rebellion this particular area had served as one of several medical bays. The entrance that she had entered by was actually a emergency exit. As Shinzon loped across the cold durasteel floors she checked the temperature in the bacta tanks.

"82 degrees.. Good.."

The best thing about Hoth was that in the summer, its days could last for weeks due to its orbit. This ensured that the forgotten Rebel Base and more importantly its batteries were always charged with Solar energy. Good for those being treated here, even better for the woman that now wandered the halls, a damp earthy smell clinging in the cool air. Wiping congealment from the bacta tanks rewarded Celise with a view of what she had come here for.

As if in welcome, the massive umbrellas of a Umbrafal Mushroom, from the dank wetlands of Naboo rose proudly inside the Bacta Tank. It was huge, grew with relatively little trouble and could reseed itself. Granted Mushroom and Taun-taun stew wasnt the most showy of meals, but it got the job done. That and Hoth Hogs were such a pain to try and catch. If she ever truly got tired of the mushroom she could always resort to Snowmouse and Iceworm (frozen algae) spiced lichen. A poor palate perhaps for a Senator, but such things were the rule of survival in the Anoat System. The only sin Celise allowed herself was the Coffee synthesizer which she'd picked up in a barter passing the mid-rim trade routes. Mushrooms also froze well, which was a plus.

Opening the bacta tank, Celise carefully broke the immense mushroom from the ground, before opening the satchel she had slung on her back and beginning the process of breaking the mushroom up into many smaller crumblings. After one satchel was filled she would move to the next and continue the process, while also carefully seeding the tanks again for the next month's harvest. Over the months she built a surplus up and paired with the Wampa steaks she would occassionally bring back from a hunt she would last through the cold eternal dark of Hothian Winter, where the sun vanished for three months. During those months the darkness and the cold became such that opening the door would mean death. So Shinzon always made sure to ration herself well so that would not be the case, and stayed underground if departure from the small hut was at all required.

After about thirty or so satchels had been loaded on the sled outside, and the bacta tanks again reset to serve their purpose for the next harvest she checked the Sun's position. Five hours.. that would serve. Hefting her sled in the direction of home, Celise applied the Force in a small cantrip forcing the sled to break free from the Durasteel. Sighing with self-disapproval she checked her things before sealing and locking the hatch to her "mushroom farm". She had five hours of daylight left, and she would need all of them to unpack and store the mushroom crop..

And so with a second sound of metal skidding across ice, the exile began her trek homeward.


Intermission I:

Above Hoth a lone ship exited Hyperspace. Inside the cockpit, A man known as Maltrake labored at the controls. The ship was damaged as if it had escaped from a recent altercation with the authorities. The left wing was a mess and Maltrake knew that he was in trouble. He'd tried to escape from his homeworld, which had fast become a paranoid police-state. Past Bespin there were only a few neighbors to Hoth. Sump far to the west.. Bespin in the northern clicks of the galaxy, and of course there was the ever glorious planet of Leirooine, and its city Trashbin.. but even Trashbin would of been a paradise compared to the hell Alexander Maltrake had escaped.

Over Hoth a pair of ships exited hyperspace. Both were a modified mix between a skip-ray and a tie-fighter. Hutt knockoffs of Sienar Systems, but boasting equal firepower and manueverability at a half the price, and safety. Locking onto the small craft, a venomous hiss was heard over the coms.

"Viceroy, you have been found guilty of treason by the Zhyrian Revolutionary Guard. Disarm and return to Vorus with us, or face the penalty."

"The hell with that I'm not a traitor! She was murdered, and you know damn well that General Al-ak---"

A clipped burst of laser fire was the reply given as crimson bands of light shot from the Zhyrian pursuit and Maltrake was forced to bank his ship harshly to the left. The ship roared as its thrusters responded and Maltrake sought to overcompensate for the lack of a left stabilizer. Bringing the ship around the small Zhyrian shuttle unleashed its own limited barrage of shot, grazing one of the fighters, perhaps through luck. The injured ship retreated, and then as swiftly as the chase began the second fighter slid into position behind the shuttle. It would of been so easy to simply destroy the ship.. But alas Maltrake had some data which the masters of Zhyr desired back, so much that to destroy it.. would of earned the ire of powers that were quite frankly better left placated.

So it was that the pilot opened fire, savagely ripping the shuttle's back flank to shreds and effectively paralyzing the craft. Sparks flew as fires ignited in the cockpit. Not that Viceroy Maltrake minded as the ship gained a harsh shake from entry into the atmosphere. A sharp blow from a fallen panel had struck his head. Caught in the gravitation of Hoth, "Moraine's Revenge" bloomed with flames, as the pair watched. After several moments the coms crackled again.

"The trash damaged my thermal shield. What shall we do sir?"

"Return to Vorus. I will join you after I ensure that the scum is brought back, as is the information which General Al-Alkair wished."

The second ship turned and after several seconds vanished in a flash of hyperspace. As for the first ship, it plotted a orbit as it waited to see where the ship would crash. If the ship was destroyed by impact, there was no point to landing on Hoth and dealing with the frozen hellhole. If it survived.. then and only then would the dark figure risk a retrieval of the "Golden Scroll" a simple gold data cylinder which was likely the only reason Maltrake's ship had not been vaporized. And if Maltrake did some how manage to survive the crash, then the cold night would do him in.

Glancing up from her work outside of her hut, Celise frowned as a dark cloud of black smoke blossomed in the sky and drew ever closer. Setting down a carved flank of mushroom, she rose in the snow and checked the fall position of the object.

"Oh hell.."

With a mix of irritation to have company, and a curiousity on who was disturbing her backyard. Celise entered her hut quickly descending to the sub-level where a well beaten snow-skimmer rested, likely reappropriated like many of the other ammenities of her hut from varied Rebel outposts and checkstations. Checking the limited fuel levels on the snow-skimmer, Celise grumbled and made a note that tommorow she would have to make another trip to refuel. Still, the speeder was the only way which she would be able to check the situation out before night fell.. and for all of her hubris, Shinzon had no intention of leaving anyone in that strait.

With a dull whine the snow skimmer ratcheted from the launch bay soon lost to sight in the amber hued snow of a dwindling Hothian afternoon.

Episode II: The Uninvited Guests

The snowspeeder came to a stop before the burning shuttle. As the hatch opened, a heavily wrapped figure climbed out of the snowspeeder, a silvery object in its hands. The object flickered bright in the cold and fading sun glittering like burnished gold. A acrid stench of burning rubber and heated electric filled the air as the ship spewed electrical sparks. When the threat of danger appeared to have passed, the metallic cylinder was clipped to the figures belt. Pulling down the snow muffler revealed a woman perhaps in her late twenties or early thirties.

Reaching out with the Force, Celise Shinzon probed the wreckage for life-signs. When it became clear there was only one, her right hand lifted with authority. Around her the metallic fragments quivered and rattled, before shaking on the ground in the advent of some nameless fury. Closing her eyes Shinzon raised her prosthetic left hand and her head tilted as she entered a deeper state of concentration. The metal near her shook more violently before flying away as if it had suddenly been thrown by a massive gale. Within this gale a massive snowstorm suddenly picked up before unceremoniously dumping a full ton of snow on the burning vessel. The fires hissed in protest before being smothered and put out. The woman however heedless of this development continued her mantra, her fingers curling as if she were gripping some invisible item.

The Ship then began to tilt slowly..

The progress was slow at first but gradually the ship finally lifted off of the ground with a gentle movement. Gradually the ship righted itself, as the escape hatch became visible and the downed ship wobbled with steam and some internal fires smoking out. Bowing her head, Shinzon relaxed her hands and the ship dropped back to the frozen tundras making a dull crunch sound that echoed a good mile. Reaching back under her cloak, the same metallic cylinder was withdrawn again as Shinzon made her way to the escape hatch which the crash had sealed shut. With a sharp snap-hiss a silver hued lightsaber blade ignited instantly from the end of the "cylinder". A moment later the blade sank into the frozen metal as sparks shot from the durasteel as it was suddenly heated and the metal surrounding it began to reduce to slag and glow red from the heat. Heedless of this however, the cut was continued thrice more as the crushed servos of the escape hatch were cloven through.

A good five minutes later, the blade was drawn for a final time across a final segment of the landing hatch. Withdrawing her Lightsaber, Celise deactivated it and replaced it on her belt. Reaching out with the Force again, the Durasteel escape hatch buckled under pressure from the assault it now endured. The "new door" crumpled and bent before with a shrill screech of tearing metal, the hatch was ripped away from the ship and landed some 20 yards south of the object. Wasting no time Shinzon entered the ship and made her way toward the cockpit.

The Cockpit was a mess. A man laid splayed out over the controls with several burns and a deep gash wound in his head. Tearing off her muffler, the cloth served as a bandage and tourniquete blocking the gash. He was in rough shape, but his will to survive was strong.

This in mind Celise dragged the man slowly from his place at the controls. He had a deathgrip on a small golden cylinder.. a Datachip of some form perhaps, but with his hand swollen it was impossible to remove at the present. Carrying the figure slowly to her snowspeeder, Celise checked the sky's position as she exited the ship. Thirty minutes left.. then it'd be dark and there would be colder weather than even her snowspeeder could survive in.

Dragging the man into her snowspeeder, Celise tried to position him as comfortably as possible. Then with a dull shrung noise the cockpit to the snowspeeder eased itself back down and lifted from the ground. Tommorow.. when the weather was more reasonable she would have to return and see what the ship's logs stated, but for tonight.. Shinzon's sole focus was to get home, and to see to the survival of her middle-aged guest.

The sun faded from Hoth's landscape and arctic winter settled in over the landscape.

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Episode III: Dark Forces

Over Hoth, a small blackened ship drifted in calm wait. Within the ship a lone figure meditated as the sun slowly crept across the sky. Hours passed and the figure remained comatose seeming. It was the sound of a small com device crackling into being that disturbed the figure of his revery.

"Z-210 to the Bloodfist.."

"Z-210 to the Bloodfist.. Come in Atrocitus."

With a animalistic growl, the com-channel opened and a gutteral voice barely human rumbled back a reply. "General.." it said, but the sound wasnt one of respect, rather the dull contempt one would show to a lesser being. The voice on the other end flickered into being in the form of a azure hued figure. A middle aged man with a neatly pressed suit and goatee. A blaster hung at his hip and he seemed dressed in the Imperial style. His face showed anger and some discontent. With a calm and reserved candor to his voice he cleared his throat.

"In the future, I expect that you use proper discipline Mr. Kopesh."

Kopesh's face darkened like a dog being growled at by a pathetic whelp. A deeper growl burbled from the depths of his throat as sulfuric yellow eyes gleamed. The reply to the insubordination came as Kopesh himself behaved. Viceral and primal.

"You are not my commander. Only one ever was, and if you wish I can break you General. Break you as I broke her."

The General's face contorted as if a unseen hand had attempted to grasp at him. His hand rose as if to combat it, and then a few moments later the man in the com's voice spoke evenly, and with full restraint. A grave look was etched on his face as he reached into his pocket and withdrew a small data cube.

"Mhm.. Mr. Atrocitus, if that is what we are to call you. I would remind you that I too have been trained in the dark side of the Force. Please do not attempt that again. It would be of immeasurable sorrow to me if I somehow displaced the proof of your part in the murders of Jocelyn Parks, and good Ardelia Moraine; and they wound up in the hands of say.. the New Republic? Perhaps the NRI would be most interested to hear how you committed total genocide upon the Parks Family..? We do have documentation of your true name, and your place of origin.. Trashbin I believe it is called now? Is that not more attention than you enjoy Sarid?"

"Speak."

The General smiled winningly and tucked the datacard into his pocket. Pulling up a small map of Hoth, the general motioned to it.

"According to the trajectory you have supplied, we put Maltrake's ship as having crashed.. here. In the Frost Canyon. When the sun rises I expect for you to eliminate Maltrake (if he survived) and recover the data which he stole. Your problems aside, the good General Taliseth is starting to ask questions. Questions which for both of our sakes should remain unanswered. It was difficult enough destroying all records of Deimos presence on Zhyr. Maltrake is a weak link, and must be silenced."

Mulling over the matter in his bald head, Atrocitus chuckled. Corbald was as were Maltrake and Taliseth blissfully unaware.. Only Deimos and he knew the truth! Ardelia had been a clone herself. Atrocitus had realized this when he poisoned and murdered her. The funeral pyre and lavish state funeral had killed any chance of this becoming public knowledge, ...but Atrocitus knew things that even Corbald was in the dark on. Atrocitus knew that behind Deimos was a second Lord.. once.

Always there were two. A Master and a Apprentice.

Atrocitus however, he alone knew that Clone was the final manifestation of a Dark Lady of the Sith from ancient times. Darth Vorhn. Ardelia had merely been a figurehead to prepare for far larger plans. Plans.. which Atrocitus as the secret apprentice had never been brought into. Plans that he had inadvertently smashed along with the Sith in his own brutal and heavy handed fashion. Whether Zhyr thrived or perished was of no consequence to him. His connection to the Darkside of the force came through blood. Blood and rage. For to Atrocitus the blood was life, and life fueled the Force. He was a force of nature. Nothing more, and nothing less. By destroying Ardelia he had cemented Taliseth, Maltrake and Corbald as the leaders of Zhyr. By destroying Vorhn he had become the master. She was unworthy, and so was Deimos for both had fallen to death. Atrocitus however stood triumphant. The dominant primordial beast who had made his kill and found it good.

He was not Sith.

...He was worse than Sith.

With a sadists grin, Atrocitus entered a predatorial mindframe and blasted toward the surface of Hoth. Soon Maltrake would know his fury, as had their former master. After that.. perhaps he would instruct Taliseth and Corbald on "respect". Or perhaps he would finish what he began with Jocelyn Parks and continue erasing them from the Galaxy.

Perhaps.

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Episode IV: The New Command

The snowstorm raged outside as another day passed to night on the planet of Hoth. Inside a small hut fashioned from the remains of a older dwelling, a odd couple made their evening. One was a middle aged man roughly in his fourties. Well dressed or once well dressed, his clothing was stained with grease, oil and fire damage and some blood. The other a woman in her early thirties was girt in what could of passed for a well beaten and weatherstained tunic. A fine toothsome smell was in the air, testament of the Taun-Taun and Mushroom stew that was cooking.

It was to this scent that the man called Maltrake awoke. With a groan he stirred and sniffed the air deeply. Something was amiss.. he wasnt dead? Raising a bruised hand to his head he made to touch his brow, only to find that it had been dressed and bandaged. As he felt the gauze, the woman spoke finally with a calm and measured voice.

"You'll want to let that heal. You had a rather nasty knock it appears.."

The voice was soothing and Maltrake nodded slowly as the familiar reassurance in the voice made him slowly relax and drift back to sleep.. Yet before blessed unawareness could settle in, registration of the voice sank into his already embattled skull and with a shift he sat up quickly; narrowly missing cracking his skull open again on a low hanging cabinet. The woman had made a move to sit down near him and bore a steaming bowl filled with a pungent smelling broth. The broth wasnt what had roused him however. It was the sounds, and sights which greated him. The sight was enough to make him wonder if he had died. A dull exhale of air left his mouth and he shook violently, his hands opening and shutting involuntarily. The face that greeted him was a face he knew far too well. On a planet of a different era he had served this woman. ..But it couldnt be her.

"She" was dead.

Still beside himself, Maltrake made to reach out and grasp the woman's arm. He did not trust his eyes and wished to know if she was who he thought. With a quavering voice as flesh and blood were ascertained, he spoke finally.

"Se--Senator Moraine.. Your alive.."

Celise now had the opportunity to stare back at the man with a quizzical look on her features. Concern at what was clearly delusions on his part manifested physically on her face and with careful but deliberate motions she brushed off the man's grip and shook her head in denial.

"Your hallucinating.. You had a massive trauma to your head. Drink this and try to relax.."

Prompting Maltrake to eat his stew, Shinzon seated herself before her own portion and began to eat herself, clearly unconcerned by the comments. Maltrake however absently stared and drank his broth. Every concievable mark was present. The posture, the mannerisms, even the calm dismissive authority. If this woman was not the late Senator, then she was most assuredly the best damned hallucination he had discovered in the eight years since his friend's assassination. But even as he wordlessly ate his food and studied her, Maltrake shook his head. This couldnt be a hallucination. As the night dragged on, Maltrake found his strength return, and despite the woman's desires to remain anonymous sought to learn everything he could about her.

"Zhyr..? Forget it, no way I could of been born there Viceroy.. After the War I joined the Jedi Order."

Sighing with a dull tiredness in her mind, Celise brought her prosthetic arm to her forehead and leaned heavily on it. A weary sigh exited her lips, as she was tired from the inquisition already. Looking up again, Maltrake pursued the issue and continued, setting the earthen bowl down on the table.

"Yes, you mentioned that. But why come out to Hoth? Surely there was a reason that you departed.."

The "Viceroy" if he was truly that, was just not getting the hint Celise thought. She'd come all this way to Hoth to avoid questions and to find solace and privacy after the mess in Deralia some eight years earlier. It was a private place that she could reflect on and study herself, and in turn lose herself in the daily battles for survival. After eight years she had assumed she was capable of deflecting the queries and questions she had held since that first day she stepped off the shuttle so long ago on Yavin..

"Family business I suppose we could call it. My father wasnt all I hoped for.. Can we leave it at that please?"

Maltrake sighed. This wasnt getting anywhere.. but still, he had heard rumors in his tenure that Ardelia had begun a private search with the Zhyrian Revolutionary Guard for a woman that seemed to match this woman's age and description. Could that of been the reason that the Guard assailed him when he flew close to Hoth? And the Data Cylinder.. what was on it that made General Corbald so agitated? It had been amongs the effects that had been uncovered in one of the bases of the Zhyrian Guard..

"You've asked me all night about how I knew Senator Moraine. Unfortunately Viceroy, I didnt. I never met the woman, though I recall reading of her murder on the Holonet. I came here to get away from it all, and was doing quite well I might add until you showed up on my doorstep. Now. ..Would you mind telling me why you crashed on Hoth? Were you being followed..?"

The Viceroy looked up and nodded. After a momentary pause, he bowed his head and began to lay out the entirety of his plight. Firstly the rise of the Triumverate into power on Zhyr and their secession from the Republic, secondarily their alliance with the Mandolorians and Clan Bralor and then the sudden disappearance of General Al-akir from Zhyr. Celise followed along carefully, nodding from time to time. But when Maltrake mentioned that the Capital of Zhyr was Vorus, and that Corbald and Taliseth ruled from Hecate Castle.. a iced chill drew over her.

As a Jedi Redeemer, Celise was very well acquainted with Hecate Castle. Her former teacher, had built the entire complex some one thousand years prior. The fact that all of this was stemming from a world on which Ryuka tas Vorhn once made her seat of power, set off alarms in Celise's mind and she began to wonder if this was all happy coincidence, or the work of meddling force spirits and a cosmic design which truthfully.. Shinzon wanted absolutely nothing to do with. She'd had enough, and yet the trouble had dragged itself to her very doorstep. Scowling Celise rose finally and folded her arms.

"So Senator Ardelia was a descendant of Vorhn, correct? Or so your records claim, yes?"

"A direct descendant, yes. She was the first to colonize Zhyr some one thousand years ago."

Mingling what she had discovered eight years earlier, when Ryuka had last spoke to her and advised her to come here, Celise had a nagging feeling that she wouldnt see rest or peace until this matter was resolved. Was Echuu still alive? Maybe.. But more likely not. She couldnt sense her father's presence these days at all. But she had almost gone to Zhyr eight years ago after the duel on Leirooine, or Deralia as it was known in its glory days. Could there have been a lead to her past which she had discounted?

A short trip might do her some good..

"Alright Maltrake. I'll take you to Zhyr.. but I want to be absolutely clear with you. I'm not coming with you to help with some damned war against your peers. I'm just coming along because I want to check a few things out. If anyone asks, your going to refer to me as simply Celise. I have my own reasons that I came to this world, and the sooner I return you to your proper place of origins.. the sooner I can relax and return to retirement."

Nodding slightly Maltrake agreed to the arrangement. Thankfully the Jedi hadnt asked him what was on the Data-Cylinder yet.. which was probably for the best. Maltrake himself did not know what the Data-cylinder contained, however he did know it was of great value to General Al-akir once. Maltrake still suspected the MIA General of duplicity in the plot, and the cylinder was the only information he had to the murder. Or more precise, the only insurance he had that he was not blamed for it.

The pair set out the next morning for the Rebel Base proper. They had no idea however as they travelled that a lone predator watched in the snow and had began to track their steps.

Things were about to get a lot more complicated..

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AtrocitusDate: Thursday, 03 Dec 2009, 11:31 PM | Message # 4
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Intermission II:

At approximately the same time..

Atrocitus was not a man accustomed to waiting. Less so when his quarry was a weak-minded coward like Maltrake. As soon as the sun had risen, in the area where his ship had crashed, he had wasted very little time in landing himself and surveying the area. It was into this scenario that he found the ship in far too excellent a shape to be happy chance. As it was now he shuffled about occassionally sniffing the air for some scent, almost like a animal on the hunt. Pausing near a patch of charred Durasteel, the Dark Jedi knelt and studied the remains of what had once been the escape hatch of the shuttle. Running his finger across the cleanly severed incisions on the hatch drew blood. Raising his finger he tasted the liquid thoughtfully, his mind working to make sense of the situation as he saw it.

The incisions would clearly have to have come from a high powered laser. Perhaps a welding implement.. but what could have caused the ship to right itself? Surely the Viceroy wasnt this fine a pilot. Atrocitus had made certain that he destroyed the pompous fool's rear stabilizers, which should have caused the ship to spin out of control and crash. Certainly it had done so from the scattered debris.. and yet the ship sat perfectly erect? Ludicrous. No.. Maltrake, who had not shown up in the search of the wreckage had clearly eluded him.. but where would he go..?

Wrapping himself in his cloak, Atrocitus removed his hood before scanning the white desert around him for signs of life.. He viewed things in the distance with a set of view-glasses, but his mind swept across the wintry expanse seeking out each living thing and taking stock of what it was. Or he tried to. As he crept across the desert he sensed Maltrake briefly, but the feeling was disguised.. as if blurred and masked. The mere fact that he was alive however was ample for Atrocitus to plan his next move. Were he a spineless coward, where would he go to escape? His ship was worthless, and so without transport he was easily stranded. More intriguing to Atrocitus was how a spineless wretch had survived a polar region that even he dared not land in.

Dispatching a scouting droid, Atrocitus climbed on a small speeder which he had brought with him, and after taking the proper precautions to shield himself from the elements, made for the only blip he could find in the distance.. A outdated outpost which held what appeared to be a Ion Cannon..

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Celise_ShinzonDate: Friday, 04 Dec 2009, 7:27 PM | Message # 5
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Episode V: Fire and Ice

"So you never exactly mentioned who was after you, or why Viceroy."

The pair came to a stop at one of the many Rebel Outposts. This particular one was a small reconaissance post, about 50 clicks from Celise' home in the Ice Canyon of Laynole. Passed over by the Imperials during the assault on Echo Base, it had served as one of several evacuation points when Vader led the forces to Hoth. Several X-Wings remained here still in fairely good condition, although they had been stripped of most of their armaments in the evacuation. The hope wasnt for a ship of war however so much as conveyance. In the distance a small black dot on the horizon began to draw ever closer, though as of yet unnoticed.

"I told you already, I was ambushed Celise."

Glancing back to the man Celise shook her head. Not buying his evasiveness, Celise paused before a wave of dread struck her senses. The Viceroy seemed to wither under her gaze and stayed back a distance as Celise jogged ahead to see to the doors.

..No the feeling she was getting was not from him. But from where..? Dusting some snow off of a external data pad before hunching over it to check the functionality of the doors. The sound of a speeder could be plainly heard now, a shrill whine against the sound of machinery heard. Despite years of evading its use, the Force flooded Celise as the intruder bore down on the pair and she turned around sharply. The next several things that transpired occurred quickly, but seemed at the same time to occur slowly. Celise screamed for Maltrake to come to her, and instead of dropping or running toward her, he did the worst thing he could have.

He turned around.

Like a womp-rat caught in the headlights of a speeder, he stopped turned around and then gaped. In the same moment, the intruder leapt from his speeder, which on auto pilot whizzed off. A Sinister snap hiss was followed by a scream of horror. A Bloodshine Lightsaber Blade had met with Viceroy Maltrake. With a elegant yet effective motion, Atrocitus clove his target in half at the waist. Maltrake screamed as his legs fell away and both halves of him laid in the snow. Gasping for air he groaned in agony.

"Maltrake!!"

Looking up from his quarry to the other figure, Atrocitus' eyes pierced the figure before him, and he gave a look that clearly spoke of victory and triumph. Stalking forward, he ignored Maltrake and paused as the other figure ignited a silver hued lightsaber. A Jedi.. here? Most Sith would of probably elected to talk at this junction, or boasted on their dominance. Atrocitus was not that sort. The igniting of the Lightsaber against him was a challenge to his dominance. From a woman no less. He would break her.

With a gutteral roar he charged the woman and brough his Lightsaber down with both hands down at Celise's head. Bringing her weapon up in a horizontal parry, Celise strained against the sheer fury of the being she'd locked weapons. Atrocitus slowly began to force the weapon down using his brute force to force his weapon down, before suddenly breaking from the pin and delivering a swift punch to Celise's face. Stumbling backwards, the Jedi barely managed to throw up her guard again and parry a stabbing motion which Atrocitus launched into next as his follow up.

Atrocitus came on again his saber arcing in a harsh downward strike, with his typical heavy handed style. Perhaps had it been Deimos, Celise would of been distracted. But this was not Deimos and Celise' own fighting style kindled. Now she was fully absorbed into the fight and the training of Vorhn finally made sense. This was a enemy entirely consumed by the dark side of the Force. His thoughts were shaped by it and every fiber of his being was bound to it.

Walking forward, Shinzon's eyes narrowed under her muffler. With a yell her Lightsaber met his and for the first time since Atrocitus had taken to the force, he found a opponent as willing to fight him as he was.

Again and again Celise parried, sending Atrocitus Lightsaber wide. But unlike the Dark Jedi, Celise withdrew from the chance to kill and bolstered her own defenses again. It infuriated Atrocitus as the pair danced in the snow on the cliff. Try as he might he could not break through the defense Celise created for herself. Words werent exchanged, but the lesson was clear as their sabers met again. Anger and rage had met with cool thinking and methodic cunning. Like the planet she lived on, Celise was precise, cold and methodic in her actions a complete opposite to the burning volcano that was Atrocitus.

The dance continued as the combatants manuevered from the plateau of the base down into the iced canyon below where winds howled with a haunting whistling melody the pair descended. Lumni-lichen glistened on the walls giving a cold emerald gleam to the iced walls. The battle however still remained a stalemate for the moment. One seeking to break and dominate, the other simply denying him of that pleasure with a shield of impregnable defense, and waiting patiently for the opportunity that would come. The opportunity to end the fight as she had been taught, elegantly effectively and with minimal effort.

Celise of course could have spoken to Atrocitus and tried to turn him to the Light again as the fight continued, but what would that have availed them? The first rule all Jedi Redeemers learned was to make judgment on their foe. Who could be saved and who could not? Who was feigning a desire to atone and who was truly seeking a release? These things were not to be taken lightly, and it was out of that unknown that Celise had left the Republic. Her father was a sore matter, and his feigning of atonement had effected her heavily.

..But Atrocitus. Atrocitus was a animal. He had chosen this path out of simple desire for power, and reveled in the primal fashion his power was achieved. So Shinzon was more than willing to deal with him like a animal. Blades locked again as the wind howled on the cliff's edge. Atrocitus appeared to be tiring, and his blows were slower. Adjusting her posture, Celise shifted her focus from a defense to a offense and began to counter attack.

This however was a mistake. Turning swiftly Atrocitus recovered far quicker than Celise imagined and again began raining blow upon blow upon the Jedi. Celise cursed herself in her mind as she was thrown back from a particularly vicious strike. Striking the icy wall of the canyon, Grasping at the Force with her mind she turned the fight from a battle with lightsabers to a fight with the Force. Tearing a chunk of ice from the wall behind Atrocitus, Celise used it as a battering ram to throw him off his balance as she recovered.

Turning around Atrocitus was driven face first into the snow as a block of ice the size of a small speeder crashed into him. Cleaving the block apart, he shook his head and stood again a look of rage blossoming under his muffler. Celise however stood and bowing her head deactivated her LIghtsaber. Her hands raised, a shrill crackt was heard followed by a deep rumble from the ice floor of the cliff on which they stood.

So.. she intended to bury him alive? Lifting his hand upward himself, Atrocitus created a counter flow with the force. Feeling her presence in the Force he countered the rather small telekinetic thrust she had made with a harsh swell of the force, buffeting Celise into the ice wall again. The shake stopped.

Starting forward, Atrocitus hand strayed to his lightsaber. Then suddenly with brief look of what the Dark Jedi percieved as fear, Celise Shinzon turned and fled up the path. Looking down Atrocitus stopped his attack before laughing. The girl had fled. Her attempt to bring down the cliff on him had failed. Let her run. It would make the chase and final domination all that more moving. His gaze straying to the pathway, the ice shook again this time with deeper intensity, a ancient rumble heard in the distance and yet all around him. The haunting whistle of wind on the ice intensified as Atrocitus looked around the icy canyon.

Dropping to a knee, the ice buckled around Atrocitus and gave way. Raging and seeking for a solid footing Atrocitus howled with anger. How was this possible?! That woman hadnt managed to achieve anything in her effort! What had she done to cause such a effect..? A massive green head tore through the ice in answer to Atrocitus' unspoken query, attracted by the lichen. With a feral roar of anger at finding someone "stealing" from it, the green head opened a seven foot wide mouth, a orange glow seen in the depths.

As Celise exited the small cavern a fatallistic roar came from under the surface, followed by a belch of fire of all things as she rolled away and took several deep breaths. Shaking her head she muttered to herself.

"Dragon Slugs.."

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