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greenbladeDate: Tuesday, 19 Jan 2010, 5:33 AM | Message # 16
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10 years ago
The shimmering emerald green blade blazed and danced across the night sky in between the fifteen year old young man and his father. The father, moving with the grace and finess of a master many years in the making, the boy displaying the aptitude and raw talent that would someday make him the same, blue against green, father against son. He stepped back on his left foot, ducking low and spinning away from a brutal horizontal slash delivered by his father.

"You have dishonored our name!" The father cries, advancing on the son, blue blade held high above his head, in a Form V style atypical for the Makashi duelist; anger ruled here.

Several yards to the side, the body of a young woman lies broken and mangled. The girl is dead. And so is something in the boy.

Green clashes against blue again, high and to the boy's left, he turns his wrist, snapping his blade along the length of his father's, trying to take wrists, score a fight ending blow.

Tearfully. "I LOVED HER!"

"SHE WAS A WHORE."

"NOOOOOOOOOO" Bereaved rage takes the boy, already a tall and muscled 6'1'', taller than his father by several inches, the green blade is cocked back and smashed against the blue wall of defense his father weaves with his blade, smashing down again and again and again, seeking to overpower the more skilled fighter with sheer rage amplified by grief.

Present day.
Ruby sitting back down at his table shook the man from his revery. His dark eyes looked back up at her from where they had been staring morosely at a now mostly empty plate of food, he hadn't realized just how hungry he actually had been. It'd been a long time since he'd allowed himself that memory, however much one might find that his past defined his present occupation. He looked at his left wrist, there was a bracelet made of roots braided together. Old, cherished; he'd had it since he was eight years old. A gift.

"You alright kid?" She asks him, watching him he sat there silently. She didn't know a whole lot about the boy that hadn't come from his father, the times that they'd stopped in. But something about the kid was different. Something mad. But it was the quiet, hidden kind of mad that made good people do great things. Righteous mad.

"Yeah I'm fine Ruby." He said, shaking his head and slipping credits out of his pocket, leaving them on table.

"Thanks." As he got up, and moved to the bar, sliding on the stool next to Garik.

"So I don't belong here...And from the way you canvassed the room when you came in... You don't either."


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Cobra_TaipanDate: Wednesday, 20 Jan 2010, 8:21 PM | Message # 17
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upon seeing the man stand from the corner Cobra chuckled to his words for a moment before regaining his composure. "you know what I am?" my dear friend, if I had a credit for every time I ever heard someone say that I would be a wealthy man by now. he said as he looked him over. "but since you think you know what I am do enlighten me I would love to hear it." Cobra would take a few more steps towards him. he was dressed in plain cloths and had nothing in particular on him that stood out except for his saber which was well hidden. "and I have my reasons why I am down here but then again,I am not the one hiding behind crates now am I?"

 
Garik_TaynorDate: Wednesday, 20 Jan 2010, 9:33 PM | Message # 18
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Everyone in the underlevels had a story, especially everyone in a bar. Invariably, they were tales of woe, of war, of romance lost, of money lost, of limbs lost, and so on. Poor Ruby had probably heard them all, except for Garik's. He didn't talk about his because it wasn't as interesting or compelling as most others. A lifeless child from a lifeless womb, cradled in his arms; a moment of tremendous loss. It wasn't a good story because all three of the characters died at the beginning. So he kept it inside, like his scotch—carried it with him, like his scotch.

He was raising his glass when Tarodal sat beside him. He hesitated, looking not at Tarodal but at his amber drink, held before him, the ice cubes dancing about inside. He had a distant expression on his face. "I belong wherever the booze is cheap," Garik said, after a moment's contemplation. He downed the whiskey in one, prodigious shot, then set the empty glass down; the ice clattered to the bottom, disappointed. He rested one elbow on the bar, turning to glance at the stranger in the suit. His hand, dangling casually from the counter, was conveniently near the pistol hidden inside his coat, should he need it. Hopefully he wouldn't. "What's it to you?" he asked, a blunt statement, yes, but not intended to be confrontational. Conversation was usually direct, down here. It wasn't a place for pleasantries.



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greenbladeDate: Friday, 22 Jan 2010, 9:35 PM | Message # 19
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There were two kinds of good men, his father had taught him; those that had been staring into the darkness long enough to have become a bit jaded themselves, and those that maintained their virtue despite all the dark nights they shined against, often in solitude. The former was dangerous because the means justified the ends, but they could be seduced, enticed by the futility of their efforts in a galaxy corrupted to its inner most core. The latter are predictable as a knight in shining armor always are. Fight the bad guy, save the day, get the girl. These men are harder to corrupt, but perhaps are even more tragic than the troubled souls of the jaded, because the dark forces in the galaxy love nothing more than the decrepid soul of a disgraced hero.

From first impressions and a feeling deep in his gut, Tarodal felt that the man beside him at the bar was one of the former.

He has a smile that goes with a lighthearted shake of his head.

"If I told you that I am the heir to a bloodline that at has protected the galaxy for a millenia, and that tonight the Force has brought you to assist me in making a diiference in a way yet unknown to our feeble perceptions, you'd probably tell me that I've had a bit too much." He pauses, glancing down at the bar for a moment."

"Or perhaps you'll follow me." He said, and being wealthy by appearances and reality, having overheard Ruby's comment about a tab, he dropped a credit chip of more than enough value to cover a bar tab as he slid smoothly off the stool and headed to the exit.

After all, what is money to a man trained from birth to alter the galaxy on a cosmic scale?

But the soul of one good, if jaded man? Perhaps everything.


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CradeDate: Tuesday, 26 Jan 2010, 12:08 PM | Message # 20
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Coming to an abrupt stop before the seemingly evil man, leaving only a distance of an approximate of four feet in between both of their figures. The movements on his person would seem slow and unnatural, as he surveyed the environment before him, spotting conspicuous bystanders at every corner and yet sensing little to no cause to fear them. Placing his line of sight on the presence before him, and running a scan of sorts. The normal eye would betray the user in revealing what this man before him could be capable of. "Who's hiding?"

Kill them all.
 
Cobra_TaipanDate: Tuesday, 26 Jan 2010, 5:25 PM | Message # 21
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"well it would appear to me that you have been. I sensed you when you first saw me talking to the other man and yet you just now decide to reveal yourself. that,to me is hiding. if you had nothing to hide from you would have come forward in the first place. now back to my first statement..." he noticed the man was looking to see what he was capable of and just offered him a slight smirk. "you said you know what I am and yet,you still haven't said a word. now I realize words fall short sometimes,but they are usually the only line of communication we have. unless...you wish to look to the alternative and then you don't get much of a choice." the distance placed between them was more than enough space for Cobra to do his own type of "surveying"if you will and studied the mans movements more than anything else.

 
CradeDate: Wednesday, 27 Jan 2010, 4:02 PM | Message # 22
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"Why was it an obligation for me to come here and talk to a complete stranger in the first place?" Shifting on one foot, he proceeded to walk a circle clockwise around the seeming mysterious and confident man, all while sweeping the man head to toe. "But then you decided to invite me with supernatural methods. You must be adept in the ways of the jedi. Let me guess a lightsaber as well?" That overwhelming cloak trailed behind him creating a very dim sweeping sound against the ground.

Kill them all.
 
Garik_TaynorDate: Wednesday, 27 Jan 2010, 10:59 PM | Message # 23
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Garik glanced back to his empty glass with a surprised, if cynical, expression on his face that seemed to suggest that he'd not heard every drunken yarn after all. He appeared as though he were resisting the inclination to roll his eyes. "Well," he said with a shrug, "I'd say you've had a bit too much, sure, or I've not had enough." He seemed to think this was clever, but when he glanced back to the man to solicit his reaction, he was gone. Garik turned, slightly, on the stool and peered over his shoulder, spying Tarodal as he walked out the door.

Good riddance, he thought to himself as he turned to hunch over the counter once again, alone. The common wisdom, apparently, was that an old man in a bar with a drink in him will believe or do just about anything for another one, or the money to buy another one. Well, Garik had something that couldn't be bought—his self respect. Moreover, it was his experience that most of the time anyone mentioned "the Force," it was a grifter out for credits; the real "Force," if it existed, didn't seem to do much good for anyone. Certainly not anyone Garik knew. Certainly not Garik.

He sat there for a moment, in contemplation. His eyes wandered away from his drink and happened upon the credit chit on the counter. Huh. So the man wasn't out for money then—not with a suit like that, anyway, and the pistol he he'd worn on his belt looked like an antique. Garik inspected the chit and found that it more than covered his tab. He tapped the chit absently on the bar for another moment, until his concentration was broken with the clink of melting ice in his glass. There was a growling in his stomach; he was hungry, and the scotch wasn't sitting well. "Another drink, old man?" Ruby asked, standing before him.

He slid the chit across the counter and picked up his hat. "No thanks," he said as he stood in a hurry, turned, and made his way to the door. He made sure to get a look at the Neimoidian, or Duros, seated down the counter as he did so; must be a Duros. He was satisfied.

"Hey, Taynor," Ruby called after him, as he neared the door, "There's a lot of money here."

"Consider it a tip," he said, and flipped up the collar of his trench coat, "for putting up with me." He stepped out upon the duracrete pavement. There weren't many people out—it was unwise to be, at this time of night in the underlevels—and Garik saw Tarodal's retreating form in the light of a street lamp. "Hey," he said; his deep voice, though tired, carried in the night. He stood in the empty, littered street, his hands on his hips as he went on, "You have my attention. Perhaps I will follow you, perhaps I won't, but whether I do depends on you talking plain to me, friend. I don't put in for superstitious prat."



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Cobra_TaipanDate: Thursday, 28 Jan 2010, 9:41 AM | Message # 24
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Cobra arched a brow at the man's responce Cobra arched a brow at the mention of the man being invited and shrugged. "you have no Obligation at all. but you were the one that chose to hide to begin with." he felt the man survey him and looked to him questionably. "invite you? how did I invite you exactly? seems to me you invited yourself. and what difference does it make to you if I am? what advantage does it bring to you exactly? this man was becomming more mysterious by the minute. while Cobra's life could easily be found out by any history records from when he was within the order. this man..was more of a mystery if not a force in itself.

 
greenbladeDate: Friday, 29 Jan 2010, 8:54 PM | Message # 25
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"Then plain I will be, friend. I am Tarodal, I am here on business for my Lord Calipsa, but this is my errand."

He makes a show of looking around them, gesturing to the litter about the street they stood on the side of. This was his element in a way, the beginning of the tale, the mystery of it all. The uncertain certainty that the Force was to him.

"Some men are like the trash laying around us. A problem only because no one will do what is nescessary to pick it up."

He takes a deep breath, his eyes closed for a moment.

"You, I believe, delve here by choice. Call it intuition, if you will. I don't sense the Force in you, but it has led me to you, and soon it will lead us to men who are as trash before us, men that require only eradication, or..." He pause for a moment, making a mildly dramatic bow in the direction of Garik,

"If the mood strikes you, incarceration in what I can only imagine to be an inadequate judicial system. You will of course decide what is best when the time arrives. Shall we?"

The Force is with Tarodal this night, as he reaches out with his perceptions, 'listening' for the ripples that emanate from strong actions, and even more so from strong emotions - fear, excitement, even anger. These things ride the night air like the dancing lights from a fading street light that are within Garik's perception of reality. It is these ebbs that will guide Tarodal through the streets, with Garik in tow if he so decides, towards the location of Cobra and Crade, they are several minutes walk away, but Tarodal is now moving that way, certain of what lay before him, if uncertain of its particulars.


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"Courage is the mastery of fear."
 
Garik_TaynorDate: Saturday, 30 Jan 2010, 3:44 AM | Message # 26
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Taynor was—for now—unconvinced. He watched Tarodal's form recede down the desolate thoroughfare in the glow of one street lamp to another, and did not follow him. However, it might well be that the man was, in fact, correct about the Force willing them to encounter each other. For though they parted company, Tarodal would come upon Garik again no more than ten minutes later; just as he followed his senses to Crade and Taipan, and approached them in the night, an old speeder in a perilous state of disrepair set down nearby and, a moment later, out stepped Taynor amid the exhaust and the abating thrum of repulsorlifts. It was only appropriate that his mode of transportation was as effete as he was.

On the short flight there, he had considered this man Tarodal. His words had been intriguing, Garik had to admit, but more so was his presence in the underlevels in the first place; a Tapani gofer, here? He shouldn't be too surprised, he supposed. The Tapani nobles were rumored to be involved in all manner of unsavory things. But what was all this about "eradicating" those "who are as trash"? There was more to this man than there seemed. He believed something, and that made him dangerous.

Now, Taynor glanced deliberately about the street—he noticed Crade and Taipan and, for now, seemed disinterested in them even though (or, perhaps, because) the two seemed about to combat each other. His discerning gaze passed near Tarodal, in the distance, but did not see him. Taynor made a cursory note of the few other pedestrians on the thoroughfare, the surrounding buildings and windows—there might have been witnesses inside any of them—then turned his collar up, again, and walked toward the scene of the crime he'd come to investigate, a few doors away from Tarodal and the others.

It was fortuitous indeed that they should all be in the same place at the same time. It was very likely that what Taynor expected to be a simple murder investigation would soon turn into much, much more. Little did he know, however, that a voice shouting on the police scanner in his speeder was warning Taynor, furiously, to stay the hell away...



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Cobra_TaipanDate: Saturday, 30 Jan 2010, 6:09 PM | Message # 27
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a disturbance in the force passed through him almost as if it were a ripple and Cobra broke his train of thought for a moment and then turned back to Crade. "looks like we might have some company tonight let me guess,your Idea or do you usualy work solo. Tordal wasn't near the area but the wave was well felt which brought a darkness to Cobra's eyes. "Nintra" he thought to himself with a sigh as everything he had felt within the past came back all of a sudden and it was not a good feeling. he looked away from Crade for a moment and noticed Garik briefy but didn't say anything. he just gave him a smile before turning back towards Crade.

 
greenbladeDate: Tuesday, 02 Feb 2010, 4:55 PM | Message # 28
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(OOC I'm posting because its been more than four days since Crade's last post)

He came upon the scene that was Crade and Cobra's tete tete and in that tailored, perfectly fit black suit he watched the pair for a few moments with those dark, hawkish eyes not yet speaking. The Force flowed freely and without hesitation from, for such was the demand of his skills, such was the demand of the simple fact of who and what he was. It came to him, that the man he had 'recruited' at Ruby's was near, and that was as it needed to be. Tarodal didn't nescessarily deal in what one might describe as reason and logic, but rather on an enhanced set of emotions - logic given to him in a certain manner, by the Force itself.

Those that would master Makashi, the Form of Contention, must first truly master themselves. They must silence fear, they must bridle rage and they must even do away with the most serene of contentments and instead dwell somewhere in between control and chaos, somewhere in between many minds and 'one mind'. The most skilled lightsaber duelists will tell that regardless of how many factors there are in a battle, the blades, the people the environment - all these things, but they are all connected in one mind. Indeed, the Force.

And so it was here that the first action Tarodal takes is simple enough. The retrofit old school blaster pistol is drawn and fired in the same fluid moment, fired several times in succession, blue bolts of energy cascading forth from it, but they are not aimed at anyone being present in this locale, but rather at the various street lamps that once served as the scant illumination for this stretch of Coruscant underbelly. After the flash of bolts had ended, those present are left in darkness.

This too is calculated. Intent on challenging other force sensitives for galactic supremacy, Dun Moch is a necessary accessory to Tarodal's complement of skills, but so to is Form 0. Perhaps odd to some that a master of personal combat would have also pursued a discipline that sought to avoid combat at all costs, but to the most wise of force sensitives, the logic is perfectly clear.

"As of this moment, both of your lives are forfeit. Gone into nothingness as the light has fled from this street." His voice is low and smooth, flowing like the most tranquil of rivers, amplified and carried by the Force, so that he seems to be all around the pair talkers, and carried only dimly to Garik. This wasn't about turning Garik into something more useful, more malleable. This was about changing the path, even controlling the path of two lesser beings.

Some burn trash. Some toss it in a landfill. To Tarodal..one man's trash is another man's...tool, if not treasure.

"But if you are wise, and heed my voice and yield to me....Then you may still salvage your existance."

There is several moments pause, as he allows the two men present to consider his already spoken words, before he continues.

A green light bursts onto the scene with the tell tale snap hiss of a lightsaber blade. It is held in Tarodal's right hand, the tip pointed down and to his right, in the most traditional of Makashi opening stances. It is an indication of the alternative.

"You will yield to me all allegiances you may hold, you will swear to be my faithful servants in all things, and to become my students and to obey my words at the cost of fates worse than death..and then death. You will call me your Lord Tarodal, you will kneel to me in these moments, or you will have decided your ill fate..."


"For I would give you life."
And then he waited.


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Cobra_TaipanDate: Wednesday, 03 Feb 2010, 9:30 AM | Message # 29
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Cobra heard the blasterfire hit the lightposts and sighed as all began to grow quiet around him. it was then that he heard the voice and couldn't help but smile for the darkness gave him an advantage where most had none. a single thought entered his mind before he reacted

like father like son.

this made little difference to Cobra however, "you just gave me the advantage my friend." was all he said as he began to hear the snap hiss of the lightsaber take hold. "you Nintra's never change do you always thinking everyone should be underneath you and that every species is lower than you are. Well my dear Tordal, welcome to the land of the unforgiven." he would then begin to draw upon his own blade and ignite it. allowing the crimson glow to illuminate what darkness there was around him. "as for kneeling before you? no,I don't think so. look around you Tordal and remember where you are do you really think that for one second or even a nano second that what goes on within this area won't go noticed? or do you wish to take everyone else out in the process. for I am not just one but one of many. Ironicaly I have nothing against you yet you automaticaly have something against me because you "sense my presence?"

"you have a lot to learn young one"

his blade was pointed upwards not in an attack mode but more or less to see what his reaction would be. for Cobra's intention was not to attack first but rather to wait for the strike to come to him and then strike back. "come now, do show me what is so Glorious about you so that your presence can illuminate the world.




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Garik_TaynorDate: Wednesday, 03 Feb 2010, 8:01 PM | Message # 30
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Garik's back was against the wall as soon as the first of the lights went out, and his blaster pistol was in his hand when the last of them did. This street, like many in the underlevels, was enclosed from above with kilometers of concrete above it—there was no sky here, no sun or moon, nothing to light it now except the faint glow of street lamps further down the thoroughfare. Even lights from the surrounding windows began to turn off as soon as the sound of a blaster was heard—no one wanted to draw attention (or fire) to themselves. Pressed against the same door that Dimitri Maximov had emerged from, Garik glanced about. He didn't see Cobra or Crade, at least not until they were silhouetted against the green glow of a lightsaber in the hands of a familiar man. He recognized his voice, too, but not his words except for one or two of them and the phrase "Lord Tarodal." Damn Jedi, the old man mumbled to himself, quietly clicking the safety off of his pistol (although he was smart enough to know that his blaster wouldn't be of much help).

It was just light enough that Garik could see his speeder where he'd left it a few meters away, now that his eyes had adjusted to the dimness. Its engine could also be heard clanking, softly, as it cooled—something he'd been meaning to have looked at but, in this instance, useful. He made for the speeder, moving quickly but not loudly. Another lightsaber went up as he did so, this one red. That was usually a bad thing. Garik relitigated in his mind everything he'd heard from Tarodal a moment ago; what was all that about a secret, mystical order? Something about hearing the word "salvage" from him now reminded Garik of his remark about trash. Was this what he meant?

He was crouching beside the speeder now, keeping an eye on the confrontation as he moved, slowly, to the trunk of the vehicle and went about opening it as quietly as he could manage. Inside was an emergency kit which included flares but, more importantly, it was where he stashed his rifle—an antiquated, lever-action slugthrower with the stopping power of a brick wall. The common myth about Jedi was that a slugthrower was more useful against them, although Garik didn't know why and, in this case, didn't ask. He found the emergency kit, pulled it quietly from the trunk and, out of sight behind his speeder, popped it open.

Garik still didn't hear the voice on the scanner inside the speeder's cabin warning him to keep away. The Coruscant Security Forces were, suddenly, adamant about keeping him away from this murder investigation for reasons of their own. Garik did not yet know this, or why. But all of them would find out soon enough.



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