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Corporation Request
AresHahneDate: Monday, 02 Mar 2009, 3:10 PM | Message # 1
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This is kind of big... it's for a large corporation, intended to be able to be competitive with another PC corp like the IMC, however independent, for the time being, and based out of Deralia, using the absence of government to build up and take practical control of region that the NIO once occupied, that hasn't been taken by the Moff Council or New Republic.

Some backstory on the corporation itself, is well...it's been around for nearly 10,000 years...ties into a backstory I had established for Deralia, something I'll be requesting as well soon along with a full system for it, but to the point...they've been around for forever, but just recently have begun strives to be a major player in galactic commerce.

Hahne-Kedar Consortium

MISSION STATEMENT
To produce top quality weapons
To provide to the galaxy what the galaxy needs

SUBSIDIARIES
Hahne-Kedar Industries-The original company of HK, and originally named Hahne Industries, HK Industries was a premier weapons manufacturer for Deralia and later the entire region, serving as the primary weapons developer for the Systems Alliance and later the Revanchist Empire. It is by far the oldest subsidiary in the company.

Sloan/Crag Armory-Originally specializing in tools to serve the intelligence community, Sloan/Crag Armory, better known as simply SC Armory, expanded to produce an array of military weapons and tools to serve all forms of military service. They still continue to specialize in the intelligence field, and remain a priemer supplier to operatives around the galaxy. Once a rival to Hahne-Kedar, they now serve as the weapons face to the Hahne-Kedar Consortium.

Ariake Technologies-A premium producer of weapons upgrades, Ariake Technologies has put their focus into developing the technology of Combat Suits

Kassa Fabrication-An industries manufactuer, Kassa Fabrication has a long history of producing pre-fab and quick assembling structures, among other

Rosenkov Materials-A mining conglomerate, Rosenkov Materials specialize in extracting every known resource from a asset. Well known for their tools, they've even produced a line of defensive weapons for miners.

Sirta Foundation-Noted for their humanitarian efforts and refusal to make any offensive weapons, the Sirta Foundation specialize in the medical field, making implants and various tools. They have expanded as of late into the field of various exposure suits.

Aldrin Labs-Similar to the noted Sirta Foundation... only less humanitarian, Aldrin Labs is well known for its droid lines, and have worked in advancing the field of nantechnology. Secretly, they have developed varioius weapons of mass destruction.

Black-A well known cigarette manufacturer, Black produces both a clove cigarette bearing their namesake, and a regular cigarette named Walker's. They also produce lesser known brands of all kinds of tobacco products.

Hahne Motors-One of two sideprojects that helped finance Hahne-Kedar in its early years, Hanhe Motors grew from a speeder rental and dealership business, to an actual speeder manufacturer and currently operates rather successfully.

Kedar Reality-One of two sideprojects that helped finance Hahne-Kedar in its early years, Kedar Reality is a galactic real estate powerhouse, continuing to help finance the HK Consortium and represent its realty needs.

Blue Star Shipping-Once a small shipping business, it grew from the primary shipping contractor for HK and regional shipper, to a subsidiary of the company and galactic trader.

Wyndham Chase Financial-A banking firm, Wyndham Chase Financial is the corporate face of, and organizational body, of the services provided by Wyndham Chase Bank, a galactic banking institution.

Kento Security-A security consultation and services company, Kento Security, like Blue Star Shipping, grew from being a primary contractor into a subsidiary company for HK. They also offer training for police forces, mercenaries, and freedom fighters.

Blue Star Cruiselines-A new venture, Blue Star Cruiselines is a luxery cruise operation, offering several routes throughout the galaxy as well as guide services for expeditions to exotic worlds.

Added (02 Mar 2009, 3:52 Pm)
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SUBSIDIARY STATUS
Operational-In full operation
Under Review-Under corporate review as to its fate
Formative-In the process of being formed and brought into operation
Inactive-Only Headquarters staff is maintained

Hahne-Kedar Industries-Operational

Sloan/Crag Armory-Operational

Ariake Technologies-Inactive

Kassa Fabrication-Inactive

Rosenkov Materials-Operational

Sirta Foundation-Inactive

Aldrin Labs-Inactive

Black-Operational

Hahne Motors-Under Review

Kedar Reality-Under Review

Blue Star Shipping-Inactive (Currently operates on a contract-to-contract basis through independent shippers)

Wyndham Chase Financial-Operational

Kento Security-Operational

Blue Star Cruiselines-Formative

Added (02 Mar 2009, 3:58 Pm)
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FACILITIES
Production Facility Alpha-Deralia [Currently under going repairs. Production transferred to Facility Delta]
Weapons Production Facility

Production Facility Beta-Ansion
Food Harvesting Facility

Production Facility Chi-Er'Kit [Operations currently halted. Temporary production completed at Facility Delta]
Starfighter Production Facility

Production Facility Delta-Serenno
Vehicle Production Facility

Rebel Platform Poseidon-Fringe of the Agoge (Deralia) system

Demeter Supply Depot-Deep Space
XQ4 Platform Demeter (Used to hold Class B, G, H, and I Containers, as well as Pressure Tanks and Cargo Canisters)
Container Hanger Alpha (Used to hold Class A Containers)
Container Hanger Beta (Used to hold Class Class E Containers)
4 Large Gun/Warhead Emplacements
Class C Containers
Class D Containers
Class F Containers
Class J Containers
Class K Containers
Class L Containers
Minefield orbtiing the radius of the facility containing Class A, B, and C mines

Infinity Deep Space Manufacturing Complex-Deep Space [Operations current halted]
Deep Space Manufacturing Facility Hermes
Industrial Complex Hephaestus
Cargo Facility II Apollo

Added (02 Mar 2009, 4:05 Pm)
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VESSELS
Kento Security
Dreadnaught Heavy Cruiser Agamemnon
Corellian Gunship God of War
Modified Corvette Copernicus
Modified Corvette Art of War
Modified Bantha Assault Shuttle Zeus
Modified Bantha Assault Shuttle Juno
Modified Bantha Assault Shuttle Vesta
Modified Bantha Assault Shuttle Theseus
Modified Bantha Assault Shuttle Delphi
Modified Bantha Assault Shuttle Hydra
Modified Bantha Assault Shuttle Medusa
Modified Bantha Assault Shuttle Charon
Modified Bantha Assault Shuttle Acheron
Modified Bantha Assault Shuttle Apollo
Modified Bantha Assault Shuttle Artemis

NOTE: These vessels are mainly used as convoy escorts or mission-by-mission contracted to customers, or deployed with security teams as is the case with the Assault Shuttles. Modified Assault Shuttles are restructured to support a smaller troop compliment, and vehicle compliment.

Blue Star Cruiselines
C-3 Passenger Liner Deep Winter
C-3 Passenger Liner Endless Summer
C-3 Passenger Liner Eternal Spring

Added (02 Mar 2009, 4:10 Pm)
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TROOPS
Security Team 000 (Corporate Leadership's Personal Bodyguard)
1 Commander
6 Elites
18 Commandos
1 Head Technician
10 Tech Specialists
10 Operators
6 TX-130T Fighter Tanks (Painted black, with team number displayed)

Security Team 001
1 Commander
9 Commandos
1 Head Technician
5 Tech Specialists
5 Operators
3 TX-130T Fighter Tanks (Painted black, with team number displayed)

Security Team 002
1 Commander
9 Commandos
1 Head Technician
5 Tech Specialists
5 Operators
3 TX-130T Fighter Tanks (Painted black, with team number displayed)

Security Team 003
1 Commander
9 Commandos
1 Head Technician
5 Tech Specialists
5 Operators
3 TX-130T Fighter Tanks (Painted black, with team number displayed)

Security Team 004
1 Commander
9 Commandos
1 Head Technician
5 Tech Specialists
5 Operators
3 TX-130T Fighter Tanks (Painted black, with team number displayed)

Security Team 005
1 Commander
9 Commandos
1 Head Technician
5 Tech Specialists
5 Operators
3 TX-130T Fighter Tanks (Painted black, with team number displayed)

Security Team 006
1 Commander
9 Commandos
1 Head Technician
5 Tech Specialists
5 Operators
3 TX-130T Fighter Tanks (Painted black, with team number displayed)

Security Team 007
1 Commander
9 Commandos
1 Head Technician
5 Tech Specialists
5 Operators
3 TX-130T Fighter Tanks (Painted black, with team number displayed)

Security Team 008
1 Commander
9 Commandos
1 Head Technician
5 Tech Specialists
5 Operators
3 TX-130T Fighter Tanks (Painted black, with team number displayed)

Security Team 009
1 Commander
9 Commandos
1 Head Technician
5 Tech Specialists
5 Operators
3 TX-130T Fighter Tanks (Painted black, with team number displayed)

Security Team 010
1 Commander
9 Commandos
1 Head Technician
5 Tech Specialists
5 Operators
3 TX-130T Fighter Tanks (Painted black, with team number displayed)

NOTE:Capitol ship marine and ground compliments operate seperately under Operational Detachments, named after the vessel they are assigned to and consist of regular troops

((These teams will not expand, and are designed to operate in conjunction with the Assault Shuttles.))


Ares Hahne
Hahne-Kedar Consortium
President, CAO, Head of R&D


Message edited by AresHahne - Monday, 02 Mar 2009, 2:51 PM
 
EchuuShinzonDate: Monday, 02 Mar 2009, 4:56 PM | Message # 2
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This is a big request, give me sometime to break it down. I am also under the impression (as per our discussion on IM) that this is the overall vision for your company, and not the starting terms. Perhaps you could amend the request to include the initial start up of the company?

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Jory_CarsonDate: Wednesday, 04 Mar 2009, 8:54 PM | Message # 3
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This is FAR too large of a request. If you wish to request STARTING a company then that is acceptable, but before Management really has the ability to look this over it MUST be reduced.
 
Jace_VaritekDate: Wednesday, 04 Mar 2009, 9:25 PM | Message # 4
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I'm absolutely agreed with Mt. This request is far too complex, and has too many component (and apparently unnecessary) parts. You're requesting far too much all at once. If you would like to start a corporation, begin by requesting the concept of the corporation; its name, its headquarters, what it does, etc. Do not request a dozen subsidiaries, facilities (down to the last container!), and security teams (repeated verbatim 11 TIMES on the page!). Also, if you want to be competitive with the IMC, do not request a corporation that is 10,000 years old; instead, do what the IMC has done, which is to take the time to RP the development and expansion of your corporation, the founding of new subsidiaries, etc. That's only fair to the IMC, and shortening your request is only fair to we managers who must sift through it. So please do so.

Jace Varitek


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HavocDate: Thursday, 05 Mar 2009, 3:41 PM | Message # 5
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No.
No.
No.
And finally...
No.

Sorry there Jaron, but if you want all of this crap, you gotta work for it.Motion to Deny.

Asst. Manager,
Havoc


 
Jory_CarsonDate: Friday, 06 Mar 2009, 8:24 PM | Message # 6
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It seems that we are all agreed on this so I am just going to formally say

( DENIED )

Moving on to the newer request...

 
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