NEW! From Ravak & Larben Shipyards!
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Ravak-and-Larben | Date: Friday, 13 Aug 2010, 2:16 PM | Message # 1 |
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| Designation: Serpentine-class Freighter Hull Type: Fast freighter Ship Class: Light Length: 70 meters Armor: Cerametal Powerplant: 1x Tachyonic collider Engines: 4x Induction engines FTL Drive: Hyperdrive Class I Support Systems & Crew Quarters: - Autosupport unit
- Crew quarters
Weapons: - 2x Dual particle beam cannons (turret mounted; 1x port amidships, 1x starboard amidships)
Defenses: - Damage control
- Jammer
- Particle/ray shield
Command & Control Systems: - Fire control
- Nav control
- Radio transceiver
- Mass transceiver
Sensors: - Hi-res video
- Multiphase radar
Miscellaneous Installations: - 4x Cargo hold
- 4x Autocargo
Information: Need a fast ship for those quick cargo runs? Standard cargo vessels too expensive? Need armament to keep the pirates off your back? The new and improved Serpentine-class freighter is fast, maneuverable and able to carry small and medium cargo loads where and when you need them with no worries on hiring an escort. No pirate would be stupid enough to attack a convoy of these!
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Jace_Varitek | Date: Sunday, 15 Aug 2010, 9:28 PM | Message # 2 |
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| The ship seems abundantly reasonable, and I vote to APPROVE. Although I'm not familiar with a "mass transceiver." From the name, it kind of sounds like a teleportation device although I assume this isn't the case.
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"When my information changes, I change my opinion. What do you do, sir?" —John Maynard Keynes
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Ravak-and-Larben | Date: Sunday, 15 Aug 2010, 9:32 PM | Message # 3 |
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| Nah, it's just a specialized communications device. It can transmit in an entire system instantaneously with none of the lag associated with FTL limitations. I'd guess the range around 1,000 AU, so it's not an interstellar comm device. The downside is that the receiving vessel must also have the same system to be able to receive communications from it. It's primarily meant for buyers of Ravak & Larben products. Sort of a nifty incentive.
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OrionKarath | Date: Sunday, 15 Aug 2010, 10:45 PM | Message # 4 |
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| I'm still resistent to the random tech that has never been developed, and find myself increasingly curious what the hell your inspiration for such is, but this isn't a pocket Star Dreadnaught so...I APPROVE as well.
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Ravak-and-Larben | Date: Sunday, 15 Aug 2010, 10:47 PM | Message # 5 |
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| Odd as it may sound, but building ships is an art to me. It's one of my largest joys in RP. I could care less if other people use them or I do, though I prefer others to use them. I could show you a design for a ship I made for a guy in a space battle RP. It'd make your head spin. Inspiration comes from far too many years of watching scifi shows and trying to meld things together. It also helps I enjoy science.
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OrionKarath | Date: Sunday, 15 Aug 2010, 10:58 PM | Message # 6 |
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| I enjoy making designs myself. Too bad you weren't around back in AGD, or you would have seen my best work, that's been used anyways. The Kor Vella that I had for Corellia was to be a tribute to some of those designs, but that was screwed to hell. The pocket Star Dreadnaught jab is merely a joke. My main issue with your ship designs is that it includes all this new tech, which isn't detailed. I do appreciate new tech, believe me...and I also went overboard in my beginings of RP after getting off the AOL forums and coming over to MSN back in the days of SJN (Jace, remember the monster Terror-class Super Star Destroyer?). The problem with not explaining or detailing new tech, is it doesn't have an established limit or capability, and it isn't easily referenced. A player couldn't get onto Wookiepedia and find out what induction engines are or, to reference a previous request, what quantum weaponry is. Thus it provides confusion, and the ability of the creator to pull things out of thin air on someone, not that I'm implying you would go overboard with that, I've seen it done before.
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Ravak-and-Larben | Date: Sunday, 15 Aug 2010, 11:02 PM | Message # 7 |
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| You do have a point... I'll have to compile a list and information as to what unusual stuff Ravak & Larben utilize and what it does and then post it here on the site somewhere as a reference. As to why it is different, I could only say that alien technology that didn't evolve along normal paths due to their secluded nature took on aspects that were more useful to them.
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OrionKarath | Date: Sunday, 15 Aug 2010, 11:15 PM | Message # 8 |
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| Alien technology is fine. I support the why to the new tech. All I ask is for a list of this technology, how it works, and what it does. I would say post is on the OOC Forum, but perhaps the Request Forum would be best.
Orion Karath Manager from June 2009 to Present, Administrator from December 2011 to Present My posts here, pre-2009 archives here
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Jace_Varitek | Date: Wednesday, 25 Aug 2010, 12:05 PM | Message # 9 |
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| So, this request is APPROVED. I think.
Jace Varitek Manager/Administrator from January 2003 to Present My recent posts here, pre-2009 archives here
"When my information changes, I change my opinion. What do you do, sir?" —John Maynard Keynes
Furthermore, a dancing Wookiee:
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