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ReWrite Echuu Shinzon
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| EchuuShinzon | Date: Saturday, 28 Feb 2009, 10:32 AM | Message # 1 |
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| I would like managements permission to rewind the events leading up to Echuu's return to the light, and to rewrite it so that he did not actually redeem himself on Sullust. Rather, I would petition that Echuu Shinzon journeyed to Sullust seeking out several of his Darkside cult members from Dagobah that had left prior to the attack by Havoc (you will recall on the old site that I wrote several entries about a dissident group of darkies not wanting to follow the leadership of the new academy instructor). I would therefore--under management approval--request that Echuu tracked these followers (only four of them) to Sullust with the intent of killing them, but then learned of the academies fall to absurdity and instead decided to continue their training. Furthermore, his arrival in Borosk would be rewritten to include him and his "crew" of four people, all of which landed safely on Borosk and from there Gemmell and my plot may continue. I request this for the simple reason that I'm not entirely happy with the extent of which I have tried to phase Echuu out, and because the Zhyrian plot (which was never wrapped up) still has some potential.
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| Jory_Carson | Date: Saturday, 28 Feb 2009, 12:38 PM | Message # 2 |
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| How many people are or have been invested in the plot the way it stands now?
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| Jace_Varitek | Date: Saturday, 28 Feb 2009, 3:56 PM | Message # 3 |
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| I've never understood how Echuu's disciples on Dagobah had survived for over a thousand years (whether individually or as an order), and I confess that when Havoc killed them I was relieved that the book had been closed on that seeming ambiguity. I won't oppose this request if you feel it's absolutely necessary, but if there's any possibility that Echuu could recruit some peons from somewhere else, I would almost certainly prefer it. As for Jory's question, I don't think many have been invested in Echuu's current, lightside incarnation, so there shouldn't be any significant plot inconsistencies if this is approved. Jace Varitek
Jace Varitek
Manager/Administrator from January 2003 to Present
My recent posts here, pre-2009 archives here
"When my information changes, I change my opinion. What do you do, sir?"
—John Maynard Keynes
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| EchuuShinzon | Date: Monday, 02 Mar 2009, 4:44 PM | Message # 4 |
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| As far as involvement goes, the only people directly affected are myself and one NPC of which the inconsistency is not present because the events being manipulated take place before my arrival to Borosk, and thus everything happening on Borosk continues as is written. As per Jaces comments, I explained them as best I could on IM (albeit on mobile IM, which is horrid). Essentially, Echuu's disciples have not been around for thousands of years, but were established prior to Echuu's formation of the Aduban pirates. As a matter of fact, one of the leading consistencies I have had with Echuu is the fact that as a Darkside, he becomes absent minded with his own plots and seems to mindlessly move from one to the other (this is referenced by the fact that he started the temple on Dagobah, then left; then founded the pirates, then left; then founded the zealots and the Revolutionary guard, then left). I would attest that no contradiction is occurring here, however--I have also decided to amend this request slightly. Instead of having force sensitives, I would like the rewriting to involve just Echuu being a darksider. My intentions here threefold: a) that Zhyr as envisioned by Vorhn continues to exist, albeit that the only support Echuu has are those Zealots and members of the Revolutionary Guard that weren't massacred by Vorhn and survived in Compound X; b) that the Aduban pirates exist in the capacity that was established prior to the closure of MSN groups (the fleet with which I have to reorganize and scuttle certain vessels); and c) these networks (including the link between the Pirates and the Hutts) are still in operation and that Echuu can call upon them (via RP) with which to draw these peons, thereby exempting the need for followers. Now, to explain the inconsistency, I believe the best way is as follows: Celine presumes that Echuu is dead, in reality he loses his fight to Denowai and goes to Sullust to recover (it being a random coordinate he chooses) and then heads off in search of Darwin; following a false lead to Borosk, wherein he encounters the Imperial faction and cue the current thread.... Is that more to managements satisfaction?
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| EchuuShinzon | Date: Wednesday, 04 Mar 2009, 6:14 PM | Message # 5 |
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| Could I please get a final say back from management on this?
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| Jory_Carson | Date: Wednesday, 04 Mar 2009, 8:45 PM | Message # 6 |
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| I am going to assume that Jace has no qualms with this so I'm going out on a limb and saying ( APPROVED )
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