If I recall correctly, this portion: "This is a formal request for Ravak & Larben Enterprises to be recognized as an official group by this roleplay. The following item(s) would be appreciated regarding this corporation:
1) Ravak & Larben Enterprises is rather 'cloak and dagger' about their whole business. As such, nobody has actually met either designer in person. The only forms of communication have been either via text-based or messages that are simply shown via holoprojector in which the person is a rather unassuming-looking male who delivered the message.
2) Ravak & Larben Enterprises are rather new to this area of the galaxy. They hail from beyond the Outer Rim and as such, their designs are neither well-known or often seen.
3) The vessels designed by Ravak & Larben Enterprises are and will be available for sale to any faction, group or organization who can pay. Their designs, however, are not for sale. Most requests regarding sale of designs will be met with polite refusal.
4) To retain their autonomy and to lower costs, most Ravak & Larben Enterprises orders are shipped via automated bulk carriers equipped with construction droids to the place of ordering, whereupon (providing a shipyard is available), the droids construct the vessel before memory wiping and deactivaing. The vessels themselves initate a random-jump sequence until they return to their masters. If an attempt is made to board one of the vessels in any manner, the vessel self-destructs.
5) For a larger fee, Ravak & Larben Enterprises will construct the required vessel and send it in completed form. Ravak & Larben also rework existing vessels for modifications.
6) Payment is accepted in any form pre-decided between customer and the corporation. "
was approved by Jory. However, I am re-requesting this portion:
1) Under the provision that Ravak & Larben Enterprises is -not- an organization that is trying for galactic control or directly attempting to influence any factions into one position or another:
a) The request of two planets, one temperate and one inhospitable for use by Ravak & Larben Enterprises in an undisclosed location beyond the Outer Rim in the Unknown Regions.
b) The temperate planet acts as a housing area for the few hundred living members of the corporation, including enough agricultural area for feeding of the employees, as well as additional facilities for creating ship components, additional droids for ship construction and smaller vessel components as well as starfighters.
c) The inhospitable planet will not be occupied; acting instead as a testing ground for any weapons and ships the corporation builds.
d) Around both planets would be a quartet of shipyards, primarily automated and manned by droids of various types to create the ships. I reaize this is a high number, but working under the assumption that they provide vessels for other groups not appearing in this roleplay, the corporation likely has a decent amount of existing funds, though relations will be improved with various groups in play to sell vessels.
The re-request is due to the fact that the original request was not fully addressed and completed.
Much appreciated.