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Draken_TurotDate: Monday, 28 Nov 2011, 3:45 PM | Message # 1
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Senator, I have an idea that might bring business to your shipyards. Do let me know if you are interested.

 
Toben-DomonDate: Monday, 28 Nov 2011, 4:31 PM | Message # 2
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I am willing to hear you out, Senator Tu'Rot. Speak your mind.

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Draken_TurotDate: Monday, 28 Nov 2011, 4:43 PM | Message # 3
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I knew you were a smart man, Senator! I don't care what the bathroom walls say! Anyways, on to my point!

You know of the old Confederate C-9979 landing craft right?! Well, I have some blue-prints drawn up of the same craft, except with multiple improvements and a new face! We could very much profit from this, of course with Sluis Van taking home much of the gold. I'm willing to go 60/40 on you with this!


 
Toben-DomonDate: Monday, 28 Nov 2011, 5:06 PM | Message # 4
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I can make no promises until I've seen the design, Senator, and I see no reason not to split the profits evenly. If it turns out to be a major product, then we both profit. If not, then we've lost little.

Toben Domon
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Draken_TurotDate: Monday, 28 Nov 2011, 5:20 PM | Message # 5
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Of course, Senator!



Here we are, Senator. We get that disgusting Confederate decal crap off of this ship, paint it either Scorpion Red and Death Black, or the Imperial colors. It's sleeker wing design allows for power conservation, as well as being able to enter a planet a little more efficiently. Add some blaster cannons and other fancy weaponry upon it, upgrade it's shielding and hyperdrive, and not to mention engines, it would make for the perfect cargo ship. As with the design, we can place much within the inside of this vessel, as we take the basic concept design of the old ship, and made it much more needable to other Governments.




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Toben-DomonDate: Friday, 02 Dec 2011, 10:41 AM | Message # 6
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Senator Tu'Rot, if you give me a few days, I shall resubmit a modified design for your approval.

Regards,

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I'm willing to look over any changes you have made yourself, Senator, but at rough present, our drawing boards portray it as such:



  • Upgraded engines for maximum atmospheric speed of 800 km/h (from 587 km/h)
  • Addition of hyperdrive system, rated 2.0
  • Replacement of four wingtip-mounted forward-firing laser cannons with four wingtip-mounted forward-firing quad laser cannons
  • Upgraded shield generator
  • Replacement of four turret-mounted laser cannons with four turret-mounted quad laser cannons
  • Installation of Sluissi computer systems to reduce personnel operating levels from 140 to 60
  • Consumable storage increased from one day to two weeks
  • Foreseeable loss of cargo capacity from 1,800 tons to 1,100 tons


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Draken_TurotDate: Friday, 02 Dec 2011, 2:24 PM | Message # 7
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This is quite acceptable, Senator. I say we proceed forward with this! However, is there anyway we can upgrade capacity?

 
Toben-DomonDate: Friday, 02 Dec 2011, 5:16 PM | Message # 8
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Capacity is the one thing we will always lose if we want to upgrade other areas, Senator. It is an unfortunate side-effect, but consider the addition of larger generators and mechanisms to run the higher-powered weapons, the size of a hyperdrive unit and its assembly, the extra computers and so forth, it's a trade off.

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Draken_TurotDate: Friday, 02 Dec 2011, 8:08 PM | Message # 9
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Fair enough! However this will be one superb cargo vessel! Start away on the designs, Senator. I will be purchasing 10 of them once they are done!

 
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