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DevenDate: Sunday, 08 Nov 2009, 10:52 AM | Message # 1
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Deven Rel'kom sat in the cockpit of the Saberkiss, idly looking back over the last nine years of his life. All the promises of power, glory, fame. All of it gone in one instant; gone nearly as fast as his left arm had been on the ill-fated expedition to Endor. Gone, much like his master, Darth Novak, had perished in a cloud of superheated steel and gas over Druckenwell along with all the droids that had gone to waste. Nine years spent in a prison, rotting away to no end. Yet, some kindhearted judge had made the mistake of commuting Deven's thirty year sentence for 'good behavior.' That was a laugh and a half. It had taken much of Deven's little self-control to not strike out at every Jedi that he'd seen walk by.

Now though, with his ship as his sole possession (cleverly hidden away, it had awaited its owner), Deven pondered where to go and what to do next. The galaxy was a nearly infinite place. Perhaps... perhaps there were still others like him, trying to find the path of the Sith. As the heir to Novak's legacy (albeit not his power, which incensed Deven), it seemed as good a place to start as any.

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Tatooine. Tatooine was a horrible, hot, dry and unpleasant place. even disliked the place even more than he did prison. However, Tatooine served a purpose that he needed. Step one had been to shroud his left arm and the weapon on it with extra cloth, rendering him into a nondescript man with one arm. Here, on Tatooine, his old stomping grounds, Deven would be able to find both work and the assistance he needed. The Republic was going to get their comeuppance. Who jailed someone for nine years without a fair trial? What made the Republic the final say just because he walked the path of Sith? The Republic and the Ewoks both... the Ewoks, after all, had been the ones who had taken his arm and then landed him in the mess that resulted in his incarceration. It was all just up to time and luck now.

 
KaosDate: Monday, 09 Nov 2009, 6:32 PM | Message # 2
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Tatooine was a world teeming with life. Its citizens were aimless and pathetic creatures. They lived for nothing and most believed in nothing. It would be his delight to bring such pointless existence to a sudden and horrific end. But no, that wasn't his purpose. When the dark times returned, they wouldn't escape the fire.

No, Kaos was searching for the man he saw in his visions. The one the master had showed him. He had been searching for weeks until his instincts encouraged that he look again.

The twin suns were crueler today than usual. Kaos dressed accordingly. He wore a simple brown robe with a large hood that covered most of his face. The desert wasn't a place for black. While wandering a crowded street, he noticed a disturbance in the Force, like a candle flickering in the darkness. Kaos sought the disturbance. The trail led to Devan Rel'kom.

When he spotted the Sith, Kaos drew his heavy blaster. There were three people between them and a gap on Devan's side at least four meters wide. He would shoot the man in the back if Devan allowed him the chance. If Devan was unworthy, he would destroy him utterly.

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DevenDate: Monday, 09 Nov 2009, 10:18 PM | Message # 3
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Deven would never be the equal of Darth Novak. Any who'd known the charismatic Sith could attest to that. Nonetheless, when it came to fighting ability, Deven could well come closer to his former master than most of the Force users of the current day and age. True, Deven strayed from Makashi and dabbled in different styles that suited his weakness, but that simply made him unique in his path.

On Tatooine, it paid to have a sixth sense. As a native of the planet, Deven had honed this particular skill to a fine art. This day, out shopping for his weekly food supplies, Deven had felt as if eyes were upon him all day. It could have been paranoia since his release from prison, but there was always the chance it was something far more sinister. As such, his nerves were on edge, practically singing to be used in either attack or defense. Perhaps it was luck, perhaps the Force spoke to him that sunny, sandy and rather unpleasant day, but Deven half-turned. His eyesight was still sharp, but even if he'd been half-blind, there was no clouding the aura of the darkside that swirled around the man not ten paces away. The man who, incidentally, was drawing a blaster.

Deven wasn't quite surprised, at least on some level. There were bound to be those who followed the old Code of the Sith; those who would never agree with Novak's teachings and who, likely as not, had come to finally put an end to Deven. The Sith would have none of this 'quietly into the night' attitude of defeat though. As the man cleared his holster, Deven completed his turn, bringing his right hand upwards and shoving outwards through the Force as he hurled himself sideways. Ideally, the man would be unable to draw an even bead on him, but he'd also have to contend with having three strangers shoved violently towards him.

Drawing his lightsaber as he rolled to his feet, the weapon springing to life defensively, Deven first looked to see where his target was before deciding his next move.

 
KaosDate: Tuesday, 10 Nov 2009, 4:55 AM | Message # 4
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In a quick burst of speed, Kaos darted to his right, evading the incoming bystanders. He used his right foot to slow himself down, kicking up a cloud of dust around him. The young Sith had drawn his primary weapon, the lightsaber. His replacement limb was also a weapon, it was important not to forget that.

"Here," he said to the fallen people.

He dropped the blaster and reached for his own lightsaber. A beam of icy blue light ignited with a snap-hiss. The crowds disbursed, leaving the two warriors to battle uninterrupted. Kaos glanced to one of the food stands, then turned back to Devan. The fruit and crates spilled off its shelves as it dragged across the stand and flew at the Sith with enough Force drop him and cripple his good arm.

 
DevenDate: Tuesday, 10 Nov 2009, 8:44 AM | Message # 5
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So it came to saber combat so quickly. That was the sign of an experienced saber fighter, at least. The dropped blaster was odd though. The way the man discarded the weapon so casually meant that he either didn't value the weapon or he had a disdain of sorts for the ranged combat. Either way, it was something Deven could use to his advantage.

Now, having a variable-length lightclub (or greatsaber) as an arm did tend to make combat odd, in a fashion. Wielding a blade that could project to a maximum of three meters changed the term of 'reach out and touch someone.' As such, when his attacker aimed to hurl food crates at him using the Force, Deven half spun, bringing up his left arm and kicking the lightclub to life for a length of one meter. The blade, still workable in close proximity, burned in a lightning-bolt pattern through the crates, flash-frying the fruit and reducing the wood to minuscule splinters, which, still being dangerous in themselves, were shoved backwards in a burst of Force by Deven's still-existing arm.

Considering his opponent, Deven sneered and shook his head while settling into a stance that offered high guard with his greatsaber, feet moving to keep the same distance they had settled upon, at least for the moment, separating them by the same distance as they had begun at, yet carrying him in a clockwise circle relative to his attacker.

"it is obvious you aren't a Sith... yet you attack from behind like a cowardly Jedi. What brings you here, stranger? It would be a shame to send you to the Force without knowing who you are."

 
KaosDate: Tuesday, 10 Nov 2009, 11:33 AM | Message # 6
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Kaos remained still as Devan neared. He held his blade in a one handed grip, his right side. His eyes followed the Sith, hidden in the shadow of the hood. He didn't want to delay the fight.

"Enough talk," he said, his voice low and raspy.

He sprinted at Devon, covering the distance in only a few steps. He slowed as he came within attack range. His lightsaber arm whipped towards Devan's upper body, the blade would across into Devan's face in a quick swipe.

 
DevenDate: Tuesday, 10 Nov 2009, 12:34 PM | Message # 7
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So this wasn't someone who wanted to talk. Deven could deal with that. He was angry enough with the Republic; nine long years of anger. He had more than enough rage for ten darksiders, and here, perhaps by fate or the Force, was an object upon which he could vent his anger; quench his rage. There was no longer a person, so to speak, that inhabited Deven Rel'kom. Instead, it was an embodiment of sentient hate that struck outwards. It was less of a strike than a thought, the Force working through him to trigger the length of the greatsaber to maximum.

Simultaneously stepping backwards twice and keeping the point of the greatsaber aimed at his attacker's center mass, the man would find himself, unless he stopped his headlong rush or dodged to one side or the other, impaled by the three meter blade that lanced outwards. The steps back would suffice, along with the raised lightsaber held diagonally in his right hand, to ward off any cuts at his face. For now, he planned to keep the attacker at a bit more than arm's reach, getting a feel for him, so to speak.

 
KaosDate: Tuesday, 10 Nov 2009, 5:59 PM | Message # 8
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The dark one's attack missed its mark, but there wasn't time to worry about that. Rather than think of his next move, Kaos simply acted. He evaded to his right, moving under and along the beam from Deven's lightclub. An impossible act accomplished due to Kaos's Force assisted speed and quick reflexes. He maintained the speed to pull off his next, sudden attack.

His right arm was still at the end of his failed attack, meaning off to his left. From his crouched position, Kaos continued to forward into his enemy. The advantage was his. From his location, he could assault Deven's body at incredibly close proximity. Since he was on the side of the lightclub, the lightsaber held in the Sith's other hand couldn't be brought to bare.

If he had to kill the man, he would. Rather, he swung his lightsaber diagonally across from his lower level to upper right. Like his foe, he employed the length of his lightsaber and the close proximity to add to the advantage. The blade would threaten first Deven's right hip and cut across his gut and torso to his left shoulder.

Even that wasn't the result Kaos necessarily wanted. His true target was the lightclub arm attachment. He'd cleave the weapon in two while giving the impression of a body attack.

 
DevenDate: Wednesday, 11 Nov 2009, 1:13 AM | Message # 9
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The direct rush in was not what Deven had expected. If anything, it drove back his use of Djem So in this particular encounter. His opponent used speed to his advantage. Deven, therefore would counter by putting obstacles in his way. With the initial thrust failed, Deven was not about to stand and be assaulted at a point where he'd be unable to defend himself. Retreat therefore, was his only option. Thankfully, the rooftops of Tatooine were not that high. It was this that he would make work to his advantage.

With the Force at his command, Deven's own speed increased, as did the strength of his leap, carrying him up and backwards, the hiss of ozone and plasma as his enemy's saber just missed his feet the sound of a nearly career-ending wound as he landed lightly and out of range on the roof of the cantina just behind him. The man was not likely to give up so easily though, and as such, Deven rapidly backed away so as to have more room to maneuver. Here on the rooftops, they were more likely to be conspicuous, which would mean the man would only have so much time before the authorities intervened. That, or someone tried to collect a bounty by attacking one or the other Force user.

 
KaosDate: Wednesday, 11 Nov 2009, 2:23 AM | Message # 10
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"Coward!"

Kaos turned back to the blaster he had dropped earlier and summoned it to his hand. After landing in his palm, he tucked it away into its holster.

The authorites were not his concern. He'd cut them all down to get to Deven. It frustrated him that this Sith wasn't trying hard enough. If he ever thought of taking on the Jedi, the forces of the New Republic, or even those cuddly ewoks, he should be able to best a ghost from the previous decades.

Kaos leapt to the rooftops after Deven. The twin suns glared against his back. He lowered his guard, his lightsaber held casually on his lower right side.

"Who do you hate? Who do you want to suffer?" he asked.

 
DevenDate: Wednesday, 11 Nov 2009, 2:31 AM | Message # 11
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Coward, was it? Deven bared his teeth in a feral grin. Stalking forwards, he raised the lightsaber in his right hand to the overhead striking position traditional to Djem So as he stalked forwards, simultaneously shortening the greatsaber's blade to that equal of a normal lightsaber. As for who he hated? Well, that was certainly the million-dollar question, wasn't it? It had been what brought Deven to Tatooine, after all.

"All of them, stranger. The Republic. Druckenwell. Even the Ewoks. Every being who has wronged me, left me to rot in a cell. Why does it matter to you, stranger?"

Closing to within striking distance, Deven hammered downwards with his own not-inconsiderable strength, backed by the power of the Force, with a crushing blow. A Djem So user to the core, for Jar'kai and Niman came difficult with the second saber being rather attached to him. Of course, the greatsaber was still useful for blocking in a case such as this.

 
KaosDate: Wednesday, 11 Nov 2009, 5:45 AM | Message # 12
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Kaos de-activated his lightsaber at once. As Deven executed his frontal attack, Kaos sidestepped left. He dodged the hacking blow, it was a clean miss. He kicked out at Deven's right knee, to throw his balance off. If the move was successful, he'd continue the second phase of the attack.

Kaos acted with lightning speed, using Deven's failed attack to his advantage. His lightsaber would flared to life, stabbing towards the inside of Deven's defense, above Deven's lightsaber and near his throat. He wouldn't slash inward after that, intent on checking the Sith rather than decapitating him.

Of course, if Deven dodges the knee break then the check wouldn't happen. None of it would. If all went to plan, however, then Kaos would continue to speak: "I will give you your revenge. Swear your loyalty to me... or die here. The choice is yours."

 
DevenDate: Wednesday, 11 Nov 2009, 7:47 PM | Message # 13
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That had been unexpected. Deven had quite prepared for his attacker to block the blow, upon which he would have crushed him down with the greatsaber. It was not to be, it seemed. Djem So's drawback had always been its lack of maneuverable footwork. It was, as one Force-user described it, like a lumbering construction droid. It was this lack of mobility that caught Deven off guard and landed him in his latest predicament.

The Sith's right knee bent outwards, a direction it had never been meant to go. A hiss of pain escaped him as the injured leg gave out, dropping him rather unceremoniously to his good leg and, unfortunately, right where his attacker wanted him. That wasn't good. Oddly enough, the man hadn't struck a killing blow. He'd have an easy time of it, and Deven couldn't very well maneuver quickly with a knee injury. Fighting from the ground, especially with only one good arm, didn't do much to help his cause.

Between choosing a life of serving again or death though, it was an easy enough choice.

"If you can give me my revenge, then so be it. I, Darth Flare, last of the New Sith, swear my loyalty to you, stranger."

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KaosDate: Monday, 23 Nov 2009, 7:12 AM | Message # 14
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Kaos stood upright and stared down at Darth Flare. His hooded form loomed over the injured Sith. Although man of small stature, even he was able to block the glare of the twin suns. In his shadow, an icy cold and a sickening smell drifted through the air. Darth Flare would recognize the Dark Side of the Force. It's strength burn at the core of the wicked man before him.

With a new disciple, the road ahead would be a smoother one. But he refused to be held down such a dangerous line of thought. The fact was the man he stood over is his defeated foe. It is the way of the Sith to seize power. This one would always be his enemy, as it should be.

With a slight manipulation of the Force, Kaos toggled the internal de-activation, shutting down the blade. The sound of heavy boots and low murmurs approached the site. Kaos turned towards the approaching noise and hissed between his clean, white teeth. He turned back to Darth Flare. He reached into his robes and produce a data-chip.

"I'll contact you. Expect to hear from me soon, very soon," he said. As he prepared to leave, he stopped suddenly and turned to Darth Flare. "If you try to go back on this agreement and you'll face consequences. Try to run and I won't rest until you are left beaten, broken, and finally lifeless. You will suffer... Now heal, I need you fit for the coming war."

He simply hopped off the rooftop and was gone.

Darth Flare, crippled and alone, would have to escape the attention they brought upon themselves alone.

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DevenDate: Monday, 23 Nov 2009, 7:24 AM | Message # 15
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Well, a knee injury was nothing to scoff at. Getting back to the Saberkiss was going to be a pain though. So, this man was going to contact him soon, was he? It seemed as if Deven was going to have to wait for that point and time to discern the true intent behind the man. For now though, escape. Hobbling to his good leg, Deven made his way to the rooftop side opposite that which he heard the noises coming from. It made no sense to have too big a disturbance here in Mos Eisley too soon; he wasn't planning on leaving for a while. Yet, the items in his ship would help him at least bandage the damn injury.

Throwing himself over the side of the roof, he landed rather ingloriously in a pile of refuge that at least broke his fall. Stumbling to his feet, Deven struggled down the narrow side-street and out into the crowds of people who normally walked Mos Eisley's streets, once again just another normal person out for a walk on a dry and dusty world. But he'd be waiting.

 
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