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Brentaal Defense Overhaul
Senator_CambristDate: Saturday, 14 Nov 2009, 1:22 AM | Message # 1
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There's been some confusion (this is largely my fault for changing my mind on certain requests after they've been approved, and also through IC events that have contravened those requests also) on what exactly Brentaal's total defenses are, especially since the time period has elapsed nine years.

Most of the confusion comes down to this: originally, I believe, several theater shields on Brentaal were requested. However, this was switched to a planetary shield generator, and then the planetary shield generator I believe was then sacrificed in favor of a theater shield generator at the Brentaal Academy for Force Sensitives which, of course, is no longer necessary. So, in order to sort all this out I request all of that be disregarded in favor of this simple setup:

- 1 Theater Shield Generator for the city of Cormond
- 1 Theater Shield Generator for the city of Oradin
- 1 Golan-II Space Defense Platform (primarily for traffic control, but of course, also defense)

Bear in mind that Brentaal is a Core World and arguably the most important trade hub in the galaxy, thus necessitating defenses such as these. In this setup, the former Brentaal Academy would go back to being a simple trading outpost and military depot. Now, in accordance with all of this, I'd actually like to reduce the total number of Brentaal's ships. These are it's current figures:

- HMS Defender
- 4 CR90 Corellian Corvettes
- 3 Star Galleons (converted as carriers)
- 4 Squadrons of Cloakshape Fighters (48)

Considering that nine years have gone by, I think something of an update is in order and thus I propose the following reduction/replacements:

- HMS Defender
- 3 DP20 Corellian Gunships, instead of 4 CR90s
- 3 Star Galleons (converted as carriers)
- 4 Squadrons of X-Wings, instead of Cloakshapes

Assuming it's approved in roughly this form, this will be my final request on this matter. Finally, however, there's one more point I wish to raise. Wookieepedia lists Cormond as Brentaal's capital city, however it also lists Vuultin as its capital city from a different source. I request that these be regarded as the same city; that Cormond is its current and traditional name, but was changed briefly to Vuultin under the Empire. I think this simplifies matters.


 
Jory_CarsonDate: Sunday, 15 Nov 2009, 9:47 AM | Message # 2
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Vtoe: APPROVE
 
Jace_VaritekDate: Wednesday, 18 Nov 2009, 2:53 AM | Message # 3
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Been a few days now and doesn't seem like there's going to be anything in the way of opposition, so I declare thee request APPROVED.

Jace Varitek


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