| Rkhakh | Date: Sunday, 15 Jul 2012, 11:30 PM | Message # 1 |
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| Alright, making a new one for organizational sake, and since the original was on the issue of the timeline and we all seem to be in agreement on the "Day Two" philosophy. There are quite a few issues that have started right off the bat, and I want to bring them to everyone's attention. First off, Baird, this was an awesome idea, and I think you've started something here.
However, we all need to be mindful of something... this is 22 BBY, not 10 BBY. Oswaldt isn't the raging dick of the Senate, he's a military officer who doesn't look too kindly upon the Jedi. There, yet, seems to be this stand-offish feeling towards him, and almost seemingly inability to separate the two. Oswaldt threw in some things, which seems to have been utterly ignored. Baird even states in his post, "Noble Team" takes orders from Republic Officers; well, there's a Republic Officer, and he's relaying orders from command to the squad, which is acting as if he isn't even in the room.
Another issue, location. We're in a room, and yet suddenly, somehow, we're outside. Yes, I made the mistake we were on Oswaldt's ship and not Baird's (what ship is that, by the way?); but at least it remained in a room. Also, we don't need anyone that possibly wants to be involved to be introduced right now. You can jump in later, when it flows better for the story. The Jedi make sense to make their entrance now, Oswaldt makes sense to be briefing the team on their mission. Now that they're trying to move out for the mission, it doesn't make sense to have more people pile in on a thread that already seems to be losing order in lack of a posting order; we shouldn't see it become worse by throwing more bodies into the pile. I'm not one to try to discourage anyone from anything, just to go about it logically. I'm seeing alot of things here, that are putting some people off of participating. I've laid these out, and I think we should try to address them sooner rather than later, when people start pulling out of the thread.
Jedi Knight R'khakh
Holy Order of the Jedi Knights
Warrior of Clan Khim'bar
Jedi General of the 89th Assault Corps
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| Baird | Date: Monday, 16 Jul 2012, 9:21 AM | Message # 2 |
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| I can go back and alter my post(s) so that he's still outside, and waiting for any one else that might be joining with him.
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Damian Baird.
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| Rkhakh | Date: Monday, 16 Jul 2012, 10:24 PM | Message # 3 |
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| I don't think that'll quite solve the problem of some seemingly not paying attention to each other, alluding to current events, and the seeming possibility of the thread becoming jumbled with everyone wanting to participate jumping in all at once.
Jedi Knight R'khakh
Holy Order of the Jedi Knights
Warrior of Clan Khim'bar
Jedi General of the 89th Assault Corps
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| Baird | Date: Tuesday, 17 Jul 2012, 9:45 PM | Message # 4 |
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| I could've also waited a bit longer I suppose, But I agree with you that people weren't reading.
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Friend of the oppressed.
Liberator of the enthralled.
Damian Baird.
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| Havoc | Date: Monday, 23 Jul 2012, 1:16 PM | Message # 5 |
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| So is it safe to continue posting?
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